列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit long. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I usually make a mental list before shopping by checking my fridge to see what I need. Then, I browse the store for those items and sometimes try new products.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Use correct grammar and complete your thoughts. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I don't often make lists for work, but when I'm very busy, I create a list to prioritize my tasks. This helps me focus on the most important jobs first and manage my time better.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler phrases and be more specific.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to remember tasks mentally. For example, I usually keep everything in my mind and rarely forget important things.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid redundancy.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me. Although I don't use it often, I create lists for important things like passwords to help me remember them.

× Well that I don't do it oftenly.

✓ Well, I don't do it often.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form in English. The correct adverb is 'often'. Also, the phrase 'Well that I don't do it oftenly' is awkward; it should be 'Well, I don't do it often.' to place the adverb correctly and improve clarity.

× I have to create at least about all the task that I need to accomplish during the day so I can.

✓ I have to create at least a list of all the tasks that I need to accomplish during the day so I can.

The phrase 'create at least about all the task' is incorrect. The preposition 'about' is misused here, and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'all'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning and corrects the preposition usage.

× I have to create at least about all the task that I need to accomplish during the day so I can.

✓ I have to create at least a list of all the tasks that I need to accomplish during the day so I can.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items. Using the singular form here is incorrect when referring to multiple tasks.

× Well, as a person that I don't like to do this either, I think it's not because we're not organized.

✓ Well, as a person who doesn't like to do this either, I think it's not because we're not organized.

The relative pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' is the correct relative pronoun when referring to people. Also, 'I don't like to do this' is better expressed as 'doesn't like to do this' to agree with 'a person'.

× I think it's because, well, I was talking by myself.

✓ I think it's because, well, I was talking to myself.

The phrase 'talking by myself' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'talking to myself' when referring to speaking alone or thinking aloud.

× I don't, I don't forget about stuff. And so I have everything on mine.

✓ I don't, I don't forget about stuff. And so I have everything in my mind.

The phrase 'on mine' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'in my mind' to indicate that the information is remembered mentally.

× I actually like to have a lift on my notepad on my phone though, and that's it.

✓ I actually like to have a list on my notepad on my phone though, and that's it.

The word 'lift' is a typo or incorrect word here; it should be 'list'. Also, the preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'list' and 'notepad'.