列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'sew' thay vì 'shop', 'make the blend' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh mua sắm.

範例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me plan what I need and avoid buying things impulsively. It also makes shopping more convenient and efficient for me.

建議: Bạn nên cải thiện cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ như 'make' nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hiệu quả của việc lập danh sách.

範例: As a student, I usually make a study list and timetable to organize my daily tasks. This helps me study consistently and improves my productivity.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao một số người không thích lập danh sách.

範例: I think some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming and stressful to set goals. Also, they prefer to act spontaneously rather than follow a plan.

建議: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng giấy hơn điện thoại.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I often forget to check my phone lists. With paper, I can easily review and focus on my tasks.

× I often make a list when I sew because I want to do something in the pipeline and I don't want to buy something that is spontaneously and I want to make the blend before I go shopping.

✓ I often make a list when I sew because I want to do something in the pipeline and I don't want to buy something spontaneously and I want to make the plan before I go shopping.

The phrase 'buy something that is spontaneously' is incorrect because 'spontaneously' is an adverb and cannot modify a noun directly. The correct form is to use 'buy something spontaneously' without 'that is'. Also, 'make the blend' seems to be a misuse; likely, the intended word is 'plan'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also it is it is convenience and more comfortable for me when I shop.

✓ Also, it is convenient and more comfortable for me when I shop.

The word 'convenience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'it'. The correct adjective is 'convenient'. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves sentence flow.

× As a as a student I usually make a list for my studying because I want to make plan and do make a timetable for my studying to do it repetitively in day-to-day and it is effective.

✓ As a student, I usually make a list for my studying because I want to make a plan and create a timetable for my studying to do it repetitively day-to-day, and it is effective.

The phrase 'make plan' is missing an article; it should be 'make a plan'. Also, 'do make a timetable' is awkward; 'create a timetable' is clearer. Adding commas and adjusting word order improves readability.

× I think people don't want making this because they see that activity is time consuming and more stressful when they make some goals and making lists to do.

✓ I think people don't want to make this because they see that the activity is time-consuming and more stressful when they set some goals and make lists to do.

After 'don't want', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make', not the gerund 'making'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Make some goals' is better expressed as 'set some goals'.

× And also people like to do something spontaneously and don't want to do it.

✓ Also, people like to do things spontaneously and don't want to plan them.

The pronoun 'it' is vague here. Replacing 'something' with 'things' and clarifying 'don't want to do it' to 'don't want to plan them' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would refer make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I sometime when I make it in my phone I really forget to track my goals and my activities to do and but on if I do it on paper I can easily check it and easily focus on.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because sometimes when I make it on my phone, I really forget to track my goals and my activities to do, but if I do it on paper, I can easily check it and focus better.

The phrase 'would refer make' is incorrect; it should be 'would prefer to make'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and correcting conjunctions for clarity and grammatical correctness.