列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，比如“a list of our shop”应为“a shopping list”，时态混乱，且句子较长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态，并且避免冗余。

範例: Sometimes I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket, but usually I just buy what I remember because I don't always know everything I need in advance.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“everyday”应为“every day”，“lift”应为“list”，时态不一致。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确词汇，并且句子结构更清晰。

範例: Yes, every morning before I start my work, I make a list of tasks and arrange them by importance. The most important tasks are at the top of the list.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“costing time”应为“takes time”，“it's only takes”结构错误。表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法准确。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they may not know what to do during the day, so they feel it's not very useful and can even cause stress.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“prefer to listing”应为“prefer to make a list”或“prefer listing”，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式，并使逻辑更连贯。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Before I play mobile games, I check how many tasks I have completed to decide how much time I can spend playing.

× Well, sometimes I'll make a list of our shop when I was shopping, but normally I won't 'cause it's a little bit complex and I just went to the supermarket, grab everything I needed.

✓ Well, sometimes I'll make a list of our shop when I am shopping, but normally I won't 'cause it's a little bit complex and I just go to the supermarket, grab everything I need.

这里时态使用不当。'when I was shopping'应改为现在进行时'when I am shopping'以匹配一般现在时的习惯表达；'I just went'应改为一般现在时'I just go'，因为描述的是习惯动作；'grab everything I needed'应改为'grab everything I need'，保持时态一致。

× I'm not sure I will know everything I need to buy before I head out.

✓ I'm not sure I know everything I need to buy before I head out.

这里使用了将来时'will know'，但表达的是当前的不确定性，应该用一般现在时'know'。

× Yeah, everyday morning before I started my task, I will firstly list everything I need to do and lift them according to their importance.

✓ Yeah, every morning before I start my task, I will firstly list everything I need to do and list them according to their importance.

'everyday'应为'adverb'形式'every'，且'Everyday morning'应改为'every morning'；'before I started'应改为一般现在时'before I start'，因为描述的是习惯动作；'lift them'应为'list them'，这里是拼写错误。

× The most important thing will be listed in the first position and others will be forward.

✓ The most important thing will be listed in the first position and others will be moved forward.

'others will be forward'缺少动词，应加动词'moved'，使句子完整且语义明确。

× I think it's because listing everything is really costing time and most of us don't know what to do in the whole day, so we're not sure whether it's useful.

✓ I think it's because listing everything really costs time and most of us don't know what to do during the whole day, so we're not sure whether it's useful.

'costing time'应改为动词形式'costs time'；'in the whole day'应改为'during the whole day'，更符合英语习惯。

× Maybe it's only takes a lot of stress for us.

✓ Maybe it only takes a lot of stress for us.

'it's only takes'中'it'和'takes'重复，应该去掉'it'，保持句子结构正确。

× Personally, I prefer to listing on my phone 'cause it's more convenient and every time I want to play mobile phone games I will firstly and check how many lists I have finished and how many I haven't finished so I will know how many times I can play.

✓ Personally, I prefer listing on my phone 'cause it's more convenient and every time I want to play mobile phone games I will first check how many lists I have finished and how many I haven't finished so I will know how many times I can play.

'prefer to listing'应改为'prefer listing'，'prefer'后接动名词形式；'will firstly and check'结构不完整，应改为'will first check'。