列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a complete sentence directly answering the question, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can remember what I need."

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can remember what I need.

建議: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Provide a clear, direct response and explain your reasoning with linking words. For example, "I never make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible, and it works well for me."

範例: I never make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible, and it works well for me.

建議: Avoid filler words like "uh" and complete your sentences properly. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. For example, "I think some people don't like making lists because they want to keep things flexible."

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they want to keep things flexible.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but contains a grammatical error ('more easier'). Use correct comparative forms and provide a bit more detail. For example, "I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's easier and more convenient for me."

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's easier and more convenient for me.

× I usually don't make, at least when I shop because when I shop I always remember what I need.

✓ I usually don't make a list, at least when I shop, because I always remember what I need.

The original sentence is missing the object 'a list' after 'make', which causes confusion. Adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× I never make a list for my work because I I don't need this one.

✓ I never make a list for my work because I don't need one.

The phrase 'I I' is a repetition error. Also, 'this one' is awkward here; 'one' is more appropriate to refer to 'a list' in this context.

× I have work. I have work when I don't make a list.

✓ I can manage my work even when I don't make a list.

The original sentences are repetitive and unclear. Combining them into one clear sentence improves clarity and flow.

× Uh, I think because, uh, uh, they usually don't make a list, uh, because they to keep things flexible.

✓ I think it's because they usually don't make a list to keep things flexible.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains filler words. Removing fillers and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone, not a paper, because it is more easier for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone, not on paper, because it is easier for me.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Also, 'not a paper' should be 'not on paper' to correctly use the preposition.