列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答比较自然，但有些语法错误和表达不够准确，比如“shop base it on how I feel”应为“shop based on how I feel”，另外“truck”应为“cart”或“basket”。建议注意语法准确性和用词恰当，同时回答可以更简洁，避免重复。

範例: Not really. Even if I make a list, I usually add extra items to my shopping cart because I shop based on my feelings. If I see something I like, I just grab it. So, making a list doesn't help me much.

建議: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体，表达了观点和原因。但有些小错误，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，“take something off in the list”应为“take something off the list”。建议注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list every morning before I start work. It helps me keep track of what needs to be done and makes me feel more organized. I feel more motivated when I take something off the list because it gives me a small sense of achievement.

建議: 你的回答表达了原因，但句子“for simple texts”不完整且不清楚，建议改为完整句子如“For simple tasks”。另外，注意句子连贯性和完整性。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything just fine. They feel writing things down is unnecessary and takes extra time. For simple tasks, they think it's easier to keep everything in their mind.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法和用词错误，如“make list”应为“make a list”，“I can addict anytime”应为“I can add items anytime”，“what on the list”应为“what is on the list”。建议注意冠词、动词形式和句子完整性。

範例: I usually make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. I can add items anytime and set reminders if needed. Plus, I always have my phone with me, so I won't forget what is on the list when I go out.

× I kind of shop base it on how I feel.

✓ I kind of shop based on how I feel.

The verb 'base' should be in the '-ed' form 'based' to correctly function as a past participle in this passive construction. 'Shop based on' is the correct phrase meaning 'shop according to'. The original sentence incorrectly uses the base form 'base'. Use 'based' to indicate the action is done according to feelings.

× I usually make A to do list every morning before I start work.

✓ I usually make a to-do list every morning before I start work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Also, 'a' is the correct quantifier here for a singular countable noun. The original sentence incorrectly capitalizes 'A' and misses the hyphenation.

× It helps me keep track of what needs to be done and make me feel more organized.

✓ It helps me keep track of what needs to be done and makes me feel more organized.

The subject 'It' requires the verb in the third person singular form. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The original sentence incorrectly uses the base form 'make' instead of 'makes'.

× I feel more motivated when I take something off in the list.

✓ I feel more motivated when I take something off the list.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'take something off the list' without 'in'. 'Off' already indicates removal from the list, so 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× For simple texts.

✓ For simple tasks.

The word 'texts' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'tasks' (things to do). 'Texts' refers to written messages, which does not fit the context of making lists. This is a misuse of vocabulary rather than a pronoun error, but since no pronoun error is present, this correction is necessary for clarity.

× They think it is easier to just keep in their mind.

✓ They think it is easier to just keep it in their mind.

The pronoun 'it' is missing before 'in their mind'. The phrase should be 'keep it in their mind' to correctly refer to the information being remembered. The original sentence omits 'it', making the sentence incomplete.

× I usually make list on my phone, it is super convenient, I can addict anytime and set reminder if needed.

✓ I usually make lists on my phone; it is super convenient. I can add to it anytime and set reminders if needed.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural or repeated action. 'Addict' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'add'. 'Set reminder' should be 'set reminders' to match plural usage. Also, the sentence should be split for clarity. The original sentence has multiple errors in quantifiers and word choice.

× Plus I always have my phone with me so I won't forget what on the list when I go out.

✓ Plus, I always have my phone with me so I won't forget what's on the list when I go out.

The phrase 'what on the list' is missing the verb 'is' contracted as 'what's'. The correct phrase is 'what's on the list'. The original sentence omits this verb, making it grammatically incorrect.