列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me save time. For example, when I have a list, I can find items quickly without wandering around the mall.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some unclear phrases. Try to speak more confidently and use precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. I use a planner daily to write down what I need to accomplish each week or month.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Try to use simpler, correct expressions and link your ideas logically. Avoid unclear words like 'planet' or 'agent' if you mean 'planner' or 'agenda'.

範例: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel stressed when they see many tasks to do. Instead, they prefer to handle things spontaneously without planning.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some pronunciation and word choice issues (e.g., 'leaves' instead of 'lists'). Try to use clear vocabulary and avoid filler words. Also, improve sentence structure for better flow.

範例: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I don't have to worry about losing my list.

× Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because I think it's really important to have clear what is the way when I will be there in the mall because sometimes I I lost a lot of time looking for the things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because I think it's really important to be clear about the way when I am at the mall, as sometimes I lose a lot of time looking for things.

The original sentence has a confusing structure and incorrect verb tenses. 'Have clear what is the way' is incorrect; it should be 'be clear about the way'. Also, 'I will be there' should be 'I am at the mall' to match the habitual present context. 'I lost' should be 'I lose' to indicate a habitual action. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I used to do that because I think it's really important to have a clear way of the day.

✓ Yes, I used to do that because I thought it was really important to have a clear plan for the day.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit, so the following verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. 'I think' should be 'I thought' and 'have' should be 'had' or rephrased as 'was'. Also, 'a clear way of the day' is unclear; 'a clear plan for the day' is more appropriate.

× In my opinion is because some people don't like to feel pressure or don't like to feel anxious when they see her planet or her agent and they see that they have few time for doing a lot of things.

✓ In my opinion, it is because some people don't like to feel pressure or anxiety when they see their planner or their agenda and realize they have little time to do many things.

The pronouns 'her planet' and 'her agent' are incorrect; they should be 'their planner' and 'their agenda' to match the plural subject 'some people'. Also, 'few time' should be 'little time' as 'time' is uncountable. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× So I think they prefer to manage or to handle the situation to the other way.

✓ So I think they prefer to manage or handle the situation in another way.

The phrase 'to the other way' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' as in 'in another way'. Also, 'to handle' does not need 'to' after 'prefer'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and smoother phrasing.

× I used to make leaves in paper, but now I prefer to do that in my cell phone because I think it's easier.

✓ I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer to do that on my cell phone because I think it's easier.

'Make leaves in paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make lists on paper'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to paper or a phone screen. The sentence is corrected for proper quantifier and preposition use.

× So I prefer to do this in myself and it's more secure for me.

✓ So I prefer to do this on my phone and it's more secure for me.

The phrase 'in myself' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone' to indicate the device used. 'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and does not fit here. The sentence is corrected for proper pronoun and preposition use.