列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I remember the items I need. I prefer to buy only what I have in mind to avoid unnecessary purchases.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có lỗi phát âm và từ dùng chưa chính xác ("clash" thay vì "list"). Hãy chú ý dùng từ chính xác và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting my workday, and it helps me complete all my tasks efficiently by the end of the day.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để rõ nghĩa.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer freedom and independence, so they don't want to be restricted by strict plans.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ lặp lại và tiếng ừ ừ quá nhiều. Hãy nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer making to-do lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check and update my list anytime.

× I usually do not write a list before I go to shop.

✓ I usually do not write a list before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity of shopping. 'Shopping' is a gerund used after 'go' to indicate the activity.

× So I always go to the store and buy exactly things for me.

✓ So I always go to the store and buy exactly the things I need.

The phrase 'buy exactly things for me' is incorrect. 'Things' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular items, and 'for me' is unnecessary because the context implies the items are for the speaker. Also, 'exactly' should modify 'the things' properly.

× I think that is extremely necessary for me to make a clash before I start my work day and it's quite efficient for me to fulfill all of my tasks before the work day ends.

✓ I think it is extremely necessary for me to make a plan before I start my work day, and it's quite efficient for me to complete all of my tasks before the work day ends.

The word 'clash' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'plan'. Also, 'fulfill' is not the best verb here; 'complete' is more appropriate when referring to tasks.

× There are many reasons for this, but I strongly believe that they are the type of people who want to be free and through independent, so they don't want to be in any compulsory plan.

✓ There are many reasons for this, but I strongly believe that they are the type of people who want to be free and truly independent, so they don't want to be in any compulsory plan.

The word 'through' is incorrect; the correct word is 'truly' to express genuine independence.

× Umm making A to do list on my phone is much more convenient for me to keep tracking with this with this list umm because I always, I always hold my handphone so it's easier for me to check and look for more.

✓ Making a to-do list on my phone is much more convenient for me to keep track of this list because I always have my phone with me, so it's easier for me to check and add more items.

The phrase 'keep tracking with this with this list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep track of this list'. Also, 'hold my handphone' is unnatural; 'have my phone with me' is better. 'Look for more' is vague; 'add more items' clarifies the meaning.