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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

No, I really go shopping with a certain plan at least. I urgently need something specific, and most of the time I just stroll around the shopping mall and pick up things that catch my eyes. I guess you could say I'm a kind of perceiving person from the MBTI perspective, which means I prefer flexible.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Yes, but only sometimes. For example, during the exam periods when I felt overwhelmed by deadlines, I will make A to do list to organize all my assignments. It helps me to see what need to be done first while you give me a sense of control when things getting busy.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Well, from my point of view, some people can be described as perceiving people from an MBTI series, which means that they prefer flexible in their daily life rather than sticking to a street plan. That's why they don't like to make the list.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

Definitely on my phone, it's just more convenient since I always have my phone with me, unlike paperless that I may forgot or lose. The data list can be permanently stored and checked at any time.

評估

總分

總分: 6.0流暢度與連貫性: 6.0發音: 6.0文法: 5.5詞彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 70.0

建議: 回答时应更直接回应问题,避免不必要的复杂表达。可以简化语言,突出重点,避免使用不常见的心理学术语。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to browse and buy things that catch my attention. Sometimes I have a rough idea of what I need, but I like to be flexible.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 75.0

建議: 注意语法和表达的准确性,如“a to do list”应为“a to-do list”,并避免混淆主语。回答应更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a to-do list, especially during exam periods. It helps me prioritize my assignments and feel more in control when I am busy.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 65.0

建議: 避免使用专业术语,回答应更通俗易懂。表达应更自然,且注意语法,如“prefer flexible”应为“prefer flexibility”。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and spontaneous instead of following a strict plan.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 70.0

建議: 注意用词准确,如“paperless”用法不当,应为“paper lists”。句子结构应更清晰,避免语法错误。

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, and digital lists are easy to store and check anytime.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× I guess you could say I'm a kind of perceiving person from the MBTI perspective, which means I prefer flexible.

I guess you could say I'm a kind of perceiving person from the MBTI perspective, which means I prefer flexibility.

这里“prefer”后面应该接名词形式而不是形容词,‘flexible’是形容词,正确用法是‘prefer flexibility’表示‘喜欢灵活性’。

Article errors

× I will make A to do list to organize all my assignments.

I will make a to-do list to organize all my assignments.

‘to-do list’前面需要不定冠词‘a’,且‘to do list’应写作‘to-do list’表示‘待办事项清单’。

Singular and plural issue

× It helps me to see what need to be done first while you give me a sense of control when things getting busy.

It helps me to see what needs to be done first while giving me a sense of control when things get busy.

‘what need’应为第三人称单数形式‘what needs’,‘you give’与上下文不符,应改为‘giving’,‘things getting busy’应为‘things get busy’。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× some people can be described as perceiving people from an MBTI series, which means that they prefer flexible in their daily life rather than sticking to a street plan.

some people can be described as perceiving people from an MBTI series, which means that they prefer flexibility in their daily life rather than sticking to a strict plan.

‘prefer flexible’应改为‘prefer flexibility’,‘street plan’应为‘strict plan’表示‘严格的计划’。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Definitely on my phone, it's just more convenient since I always have my phone with me, unlike paperless that I may forgot or lose.

Definitely on my phone, it's just more convenient since I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists that I may forget or lose.

‘paperless’用法错误,应为‘paper lists’表示‘纸质清单’,‘forgot’应为‘forget’。

Past tense issue

× I may forgot or lose.

I may forget or lose.

‘may’后面应接动词原形,‘forgot’是过去式,正确用法是‘may forget’。

重點詞彙

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
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