列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, kemudian tambahkan detail pendukung yang spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. Instead, I walk around the grocery store and pick up items as I remember them. This approach saves me time, but sometimes I forget to buy important things.

建議: Jawaban Anda agak berulang dan kurang jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari pengulangan. Jelaskan dengan spesifik bagaimana daftar tersebut membantu pekerjaan Anda.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me track my progress. For example, I can see which tasks I have completed and which ones are still pending. This way, I can prioritize urgent tasks effectively.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang fokus dan ada kesalahan kata. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung, serta gunakan kosakata yang tepat dan kalimat yang lebih alami.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. For example, I don't make a list when shopping because I can remember what I need, but for work, I always make a list to stay organized and responsible.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada pengulangan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelaskan alasan Anda dengan lebih spesifik dan alami.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I often lose my phone. However, paper lists can also be lost easily if I'm not careful. So, both methods have their pros and cons for me.

× No, I didn't make such a thing.

✓ No, I don't make such a thing.

The question is in present tense 'Do you make a list', so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'didn't make' is past tense and inconsistent with the question's tense.

× I often just go circling around the grocery store and make and get whatever I think I have.

✓ I often just go around the grocery store and get whatever I think I need.

The phrase 'go circling' is awkward; 'go around' is more natural. Also, 'make and get' is incorrect; 'get' alone suffices. 'I think I have' should be 'I think I need' to express intention.

× I I didn't have that time.

✓ I don't have time for that.

The question is about current habits, so present tense 'don't have' is appropriate instead of past tense 'didn't have'.

× Yes, for work I do make a list and and it's work I can trace my progress like what I've done, what I really have done earlier and not, not any any not urgent and it's the list is really helpful for that.

✓ Yes, for work I do make a list, and it helps me trace my progress, like what I've done, what I have done earlier, and what is not urgent. The list is really helpful for that.

Repeated words 'and and', 'not, not any any' are errors. The sentence structure is confusing and needs commas and conjunctions to clarify meaning. 'It's work I can trace' is incorrect; 'it helps me trace' is correct.

× I don't know about other people but in my opinion, in my perspective it depends on what the tax is given to me.

✓ I don't know about other people, but in my opinion, it depends on the task given to me.

'Tax' is a wrong word; it should be 'task'. 'In my perspective' is redundant after 'in my opinion'. 'Depends on what the task is given to me' is awkward; 'depends on the task given to me' is correct.

× Like for grocery things I didn't make a list but I can do it spontaneous.

✓ For grocery things, I don't make a list but I can do it spontaneously.

The question is about current habits, so present tense 'don't make' is appropriate. 'Spontaneous' is an adjective; the adverb 'spontaneously' should be used here.

× But for my work I always make place because it's important and responsible.

✓ But for my work, I always make a list because it's important and I am responsible.

'Make place' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The sentence lacks 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'important and responsible' needs a subject for 'responsible'.

× A paper to making a list to make a list on my phone because I really, I really lost my phone.

✓ I prefer paper to making a list on my phone because I often lose my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'A paper to making a list to make a list on my phone' is incorrect. 'I really lost my phone' should be 'I often lose my phone' to express habitual action.

× But if I make it on the paper, it could be lost so easily I just fly away and I didn't realize it.

✓ But if I make it on paper, it can be lost so easily; it just flies away and I don't realize it.

'Could be lost' is acceptable but 'can be lost' fits better for general truth. 'I just fly away' is incorrect; the list flies away, so 'it just flies away' is correct. 'I didn't realize it' should be present tense 'I don't realize it' to match habitual action.