列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop, which sometimes causes me to forget important items. Therefore, I find it less effective.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法和句子结构混乱，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并提供具体原因。

範例: Last year, I tried to make lists for my work, but it didn't help me manage my tasks well, so I stopped doing it.

建議: 回答不完整且含糊，缺乏具体内容，建议明确表达观点并给出具体原因。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it and prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: 回答较为口语化且有语法错误，建议简洁表达偏好并说明原因，避免重复。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas I might forget paper lists.

× I have tried to develop the the habit to make a list in my work, but it doesn't help me help me to deal with the Staffs.

✓ I have tried to develop the habit of making a list at work, but it doesn't help me deal with the staff.

“Staffs”是复数形式，但在英语中“staff”作为集合名词通常不加复数形式，表示一组员工。应使用单数形式“staff”。

× I have tried to develop the the habit to make a list in my work, but it doesn't help me help me to deal with the Staffs.

✓ I have tried to develop the habit of making a list at work, but it doesn't help me deal with the staff.

习惯后面应使用介词“of”连接动名词短语，表示“养成做某事的习惯”；“in my work”应改为“at work”，表示“在工作中”。

× I have tried to develop the the habit to make a list in my work, but it doesn't help me help me to deal with the Staffs.

✓ I have tried to develop the habit of making a list at work, but it doesn't help me deal with the staff.

“habit”后面应接动名词形式，表示习惯做某事，故用“making”而非不定式“to make”。

× I usually can't live out with my phone, but if you, if I write it, uh, in the papers, I will sometimes I will forget that.

✓ I usually can't live without my phone, but if I write it on paper, I sometimes forget it.

“papers”指多张纸或报纸，表达写在纸上应使用不可数名词“paper”。

× I usually can't live out with my phone, but if you, if I write it, uh, in the papers, I will sometimes I will forget that.

✓ I usually can't live without my phone, but if I write it on paper, I sometimes forget it.

“live out with”用法错误，应为“live without”，表示“没有……活不下去”；写在纸上应使用介词“on”而非“in”。

× So it's it's so it's not so good.

✓ So it's not so good.

句子中重复“it's”导致结构混乱，应简化为“it's not so good”。

× Well, I think they will think it, yeah. I think they will adjust. Don't have it habit to make a list and.

✓ Well, I think they don't have the habit of making a list.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓一致和完整表达，应调整为完整句子，表达“他们没有养成列清单的习惯”。

× I have maybe the last year I have tried to develop the the habit to make a list in my work, but it doesn't help me help me to deal with the Staffs.

✓ Maybe last year, I tried to develop the habit of making a list at work, but it didn't help me deal with the staff.

“maybe the last year”表达不准确，应为“maybe last year”；“have tried”时态与时间状语不匹配，改为过去时“tried”。

× I have maybe the last year I have tried to develop the the habit to make a list in my work, but it doesn't help me help me to deal with the Staffs. So I give up the give up the habit.

✓ Maybe last year, I tried to develop the habit of making a list at work, but it didn't help me deal with the staff. So I gave up the habit.

描述过去发生的动作，应使用过去时态“tried”和“gave up”，而非现在完成时和现在时。