列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I don't usually make a shopping list because I haven't developed that habit. However, when my mom asks me to buy vegetables or other important items, I make a list to avoid forgetting them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，清晰表达观点，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks assigned by my teachers. This way, I feel more organized and in control.

建議: 表达不够准确，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免口语化错误，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated. For example, when something urgent comes up, they may feel that making a list is unnecessary.

建議: 回答较长且重复，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me. This way, I can check my list anytime and remember important tasks easily.

× Actually I don't often make a list because I don't have this good habit, but at some time such as my mom wants me to buy some vegetables or and other important things, I will make a list since I will forget it if.

✓ Actually I don't often make lists because I don't have this good habit, but sometimes, such as when my mom wants me to buy some vegetables or other important things, I will make a list since I will forget them otherwise.

这里的“a list”应改为复数形式“lists”，因为表达的是习惯性行为，即经常做的事情，复数更合适。此外，“at some time”应改为“sometimes”，表示有时；“or and other important things”中“or and”重复，应去掉“and”；“forget it”应改为“forget them”，因为指代复数的“vegetables and other important things”。

× Definitely, I often make a list for my work as it can makes me remember some important things and a significant tasks that made by my teachers and it is of great importance and make me makes me. Feel managed and.

✓ Definitely, I often make a list for my work as it can help me remember some important things and significant tasks that are assigned by my teachers, and it is of great importance and makes me feel organized.

“can makes”应改为“can help”或“can make”，因为情态动词后动词用原形；“a significant tasks”中“a”与复数“tasks”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“that made by my teachers”缺少被动语态助动词，应改为“that are assigned by my teachers”；“make me makes me. Feel managed and.”句子结构混乱，应改为“makes me feel organized”，表达更清晰。

× For my perspective, I think some people don't very keen on making list because they think it is so complicated, such as if you want to do something urgent, Lee, making list is not so important.

✓ From my perspective, I think some people aren't very keen on making lists because they think it is so complicated, such as if you want to do something urgent, making a list is not so important.

“For my perspective”应改为“From my perspective”，固定搭配；“don't very keen”应改为“aren't very keen”，因为“keen”是形容词，需用系动词；“making list”应改为“making lists”或“making a list”，保持一致；“Lee”疑为口误，应去掉。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because mobile phones are are people's must have items for and if you make a list on your phone you can check it at any time and you take out your phone and remember something important and you will check the list and do something.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because mobile phones are people's must-have items, and if you make a list on your phone, you can check it at any time. When you take out your phone and remember something important, you can check the list and do it.

“make list”应改为“make lists”，复数形式更合适；“are are”重复，应去掉一个“are”；“must have items for”结构不完整，应改为“must-have items”；句子过长且缺少标点，需拆分成多个句子以增强表达清晰度。