列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點不自然，句子結構需要調整，像是 "what should I buy" 應該改成 "what I should buy"。另外，避免重複和冗長，建議用更簡潔的句子表達。

範例: Yes, I usually write down what I need to buy before shopping because otherwise, I might forget some items and feel frustrated.

建議: 句子結構不夠自然，"what should I do 1st" 應改為 "what I should do first"。另外，使用連接詞讓句子更流暢，例如使用 "because" 來連接原因。

範例: Yes, I make a list before starting work because it helps me organize what I should do first and saves me a lot of time.

建議: 文法錯誤較多，"they likes" 應為 "they like"，"do things flexibility" 應改為 "do things flexibly"。建議使用更自然的表達方式並加強連接詞。

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things flexibly and don't want to be bound by a strict schedule.

建議: 句子中有文法錯誤，如 "may forgot" 應為 "may forget"。建議簡化句子結構，並使用連接詞使語意更清楚。

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring it with me, but I might forget to bring paper, so a paper list may not be useful.

× Yes, I often write down what should I buy before shopping, otherwise I may forget something I need to buy and feel frustration.

✓ Yes, I often write down what I should buy before shopping, otherwise I may forget something I need to buy and feel frustration.

In English indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not auxiliary verb + subject. 'What should I buy' is a direct question form, but in this sentence, it should be 'what I should buy' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I'll make a list before my work. It helps me organize what should I do 1st and let me save a lot of time so it really does work.

✓ Yes, I'll make a list before my work. It helps me organize what I should do first and lets me save a lot of time, so it really does work.

Similar to the previous error, 'what should I do' is a direct question form. In this statement, it should be 'what I should do'. Also, 'let me save' should be 'lets me save' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Additionally, '1st' should be written as 'first' for formal correctness.

× In my opinion, I would say they likes to do things flexibility and they don't like to be bound by schedule.

✓ In my opinion, I would say they like to do things flexibly and they don't like to be bound by a schedule.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also, 'flexibility' is a noun, but here an adverb 'flexibly' is needed to modify the verb 'do'. Finally, 'by schedule' should be 'by a schedule' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I go I'll bring my phone, but I may forgot to bring my paper, so the list may not be useful if I write it down on my paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I go, I'll bring my phone, but I may forget to bring my paper, so the list may not be useful if I write it down on my paper.

'Forgot' is the past tense of 'forget', but here the modal verb 'may' should be followed by the base form 'forget'. Therefore, 'may forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'may forget'.