列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'when I shop', say 'I make a list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.'

範例: I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need. Additionally, it prevents me from buying things I don't really need, which saves money. Therefore, I believe making a list is a smart way to shop efficiently.

建議: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'however' and 'therefore' appropriately to connect ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific examples to make your answer more effective.

範例: I don't usually make lists for my work because my job as a warehouse operations associate doesn't require it. However, when I have urgent appointments or tasks on my free days, I make a list to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

建議: Try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating similar phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas smoothly. Provide specific reasons with examples to enrich your answer.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have excellent memories and can remember their tasks easily. Also, they might find writing lists inconvenient or dislike carrying them around, which discourages them from making lists.

建議: Improve sentence fluency and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'however' and 'therefore' correctly to contrast ideas. Be specific about your preferences and explain why you choose one method over the other.

範例: It depends on the situation. If I have my phone handy and need to make a quick list, I use the notes app. However, when I'm at home, I prefer writing lists on paper because I enjoy the physical act of writing and find it helps me remember better.

× I do make a list when I when I shop as it helps me to keep remember the things that I have to buy or it also prevent me to go from another another thing that I do not need in my life.

✓ I do make a list when I shop as it helps me to remember the things that I have to buy and also prevents me from buying things that I do not need in my life.

The phrase 'keep remember' is incorrect; the verb 'keep' should be followed by a gerund ('remembering') or simply 'helps me to remember'. Also, 'prevent me to go from another another thing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prevents me from buying things'. The verb 'prevent' is followed by 'from' plus a gerund. Additionally, 'another another' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'things'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I do not make list for my work as I am working in working as a warehouse operations associate so do I do not need to make any list for that.

✓ No, I do not make a list for my work as I am working as a warehouse operations associate, so I do not need to make any list for that.

The phrase 'working in working as' is redundant; only 'working as' is needed. Also, 'do I do not need' is incorrect word order; it should be 'I do not need'. Adding the article 'a' before 'list' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× However, I make my list whatever I have to do in a day when I was when I was free or I have days.

✓ However, I make my list of whatever I have to do in a day when I am free or have days off.

The phrase 'when I was when I was free' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'when I am free' to match the present tense context. Also, 'I have days' is incomplete; it should be 'have days off' or similar. The verb tense should be consistent and appropriate to the context.

× So I make the list whenever I have any appointment or any work that is very urgent.

✓ So I make the list whenever I have any appointment or any work that is very urgent.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Maybe they are good at remembering the things or the work they want to do, that's why they do not like to make a list as they have a very good memory to remember the things.

✓ Maybe they are good at remembering the things or the work they want to do; that's why they do not like to make a list, as they have a very good memory for remembering things.

The original sentence is mostly correct but can be improved by adding a semicolon and a comma for better sentence flow. Also, 'memory to remember' is better expressed as 'memory for remembering'. These changes improve clarity and correctness.

× Or sometimes they do not want to write or they do not want to carry the list with them, that's why they are not making a list.

✓ Or sometimes they do not want to write or carry the list with them; that's why they do not make a list.

The phrase 'they are not making a list' is less appropriate here; 'they do not make a list' fits better with the habitual action context. Also, combining the two clauses with a semicolon improves sentence structure.

× It depends upon what I have.

✓ It depends on what I have.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'upon'. 'Depends on' is the standard usage in this context.

× However, whenever I was at home and I have to make the list.

✓ However, whenever I am at home and I have to make a list.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'have'. To maintain consistency and match the habitual action, 'am' should be used instead of 'was'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' for generality.

× So I prefer to make a list on pen and paper as I have I have I like to write, write on the papers.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on pen and paper as I like to write on paper.

The phrase 'I have I have I like to write, write on the papers' is repetitive and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'I like to write on paper'. Also, 'on the papers' is better as 'on paper' for general reference.