列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“if”，并且补充更多具体细节，使回答更流畅自然。

範例: It depends on the shopping trip. For small purchases like bottled water, I usually don't make a list. However, for bigger shopping like buying vegetables and fruits, I always prepare a list to stay organized.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“more effectiveness”应为“more effective”，且“table time”表达不准确。建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me be more effective. For example, I create a timetable for the whole day, detailing tasks I need to complete and when I can take breaks.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“making list”应为“making lists”，“somebody”用法不当。建议改正语法错误，使用更自然的表达，并提供更具体的理由。

範例: I think some people find making lists boring and useless because they prefer to do things spontaneously without following a strict schedule.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“write something down could make me feel more safer”应为“writing things down makes me feel safer”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并丰富细节使表达更自然。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down makes me feel safer than just typing on my phone. For instance, I always write my timetable on paper so I can easily check it anytime.

× I think it depends on what I would buy and how many things I would buy.

✓ I think it depends on what I will buy and how many things I will buy.

这里使用虚拟语气“would”不合适，因为说话者在表达将来可能的情况，应该用一般将来时的“will”。

× If I just buy a few things such as some bottled water, I will not make a list, but if I should make a huge purchase, for example, buy some vegetables, some fruits.

✓ If I just buy a few things such as some bottled water, I will not make a list, but if I make a huge purchase, for example, buy some vegetables, some fruits, I will make a list.

“should”在这里用法不当，条件句中一般用一般现在时表示将来可能发生的情况，且句子后半部分缺少主句，应补充完整。

× Yes, I often make a list for my work because I think a list can make me more effectiveness.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work because I think a list can make me more effective.

“effectiveness”是名词，句中需要形容词“effective”来修饰“me”。

× For example, I will do a table time for a whole day, including what things I should do and when I can be rest.

✓ For example, I will make a timetable for a whole day, including what things I should do and when I can rest.

“do a table time”表达错误，正确表达是“make a timetable”；“can be rest”中“be”多余，应直接用动词原形“rest”。

× I guess they think making list is boring and useless because they are somebody who will do things randomly or follow their inner mind without any strict timetable or a list.

✓ I guess they think making lists is boring and useless because they are people who will do things randomly or follow their inner mind without any strict timetable or a list.

“making list”应为复数形式“making lists”；“somebody”指单数，语境应使用复数“people”。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think write something down could make me feel more safer than just typing words on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think writing something down could make me feel safer than just typing words on my phone.

“write”应改为动名词“writing”；“more safer”是双重比较，应去掉“more”，直接用“safer”。