列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I often make a list where I going shopping because I I can focus on my. I can focus on my something I want to buy and it's also safe.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I make A to do list every day in there at least many times after day and I can flow, I can follow it and complete it smoothly.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Uh, I think, uh, some people don't want to make a list because, uh, they want to do, uh, everything, uh, freedomly and yeah.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I refer making list making a list by my phone because it's so convenient and. And fastly for me.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
範例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me focus on the items I need to buy and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 55.0建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu.
範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every day, often updating it several times, and it helps me follow my tasks and complete them smoothly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 50.0建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như 'uh' và nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.
範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things freely without being restricted by a plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 55.0建議: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and allows me to create lists quickly.
文法
× Yes, I often make a list where I going shopping because I I can focus on my.
✓ Yes, I often make a list when I am going shopping because I can focus on what I want to buy.
The phrase 'where I going shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am going shopping' to use the correct present continuous tense. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error and 'my' is incomplete; it should specify 'what I want to buy' for clarity.
× Yes, I make A to do list every day in there at least many times after day and I can flow, I can follow it and complete it smoothly.
✓ Yes, I make a to-do list every day, at least many times a day, and I can follow it and complete it smoothly.
The phrase 'in there at least many times after day' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'a day' to indicate frequency. Also, 'flow' should be 'follow' to convey the intended meaning.
× Uh, I think, uh, some people don't want to make a list because, uh, they want to do, uh, everything, uh, freedomly and yeah.
✓ Uh, I think some people don't want to make a list because they want to do everything freely, and yeah.
The word 'freedomly' is not a correct adverb. The correct adverb form is 'freely' to describe how they want to do everything.
× I refer making list making a list by my phone because it's so convenient and. And fastly for me.
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's so convenient and fast for me.
The verb 'refer' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. The preposition 'by' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. Also, 'fastly' is not a correct adverb; 'fast' is used as an adjective here.
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