列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and combining similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the mall because it helps me stay organized. As I pick up each item, I cross it off the list, which ensures I don't forget any essentials and makes the process more efficient.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some redundancy and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and clearer sentence structures to express your ideas more naturally.

範例: Yes, I create a rough schedule for my work and stick it to the wall. This helps me organize my day effectively, and by following the schedule, I can complete all my tasks on time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat vague and incomplete. Try to provide more specific reasons and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they like to handle tasks spontaneously. They find it easier to deal with things as they come, rather than following a strict plan.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repetition for a more natural response.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Unlike paper lists, which can be easily lost, digital lists are always accessible and handy.

× I believe everybody have their own choice and their own ideology of doing a task.

✓ I believe everybody has their own choice and their own ideology of doing a task.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a common subject-verb agreement error. To improve, always identify the subject's number before choosing the verb form.

× I tend to make a rough schedule and stick it to the wall because this way it helps me organize my day accordingly.

✓ I tend to make a rough schedule and stick it on the wall because this way it helps me organize my day accordingly.

The correct preposition to use with 'stick' in this context is 'on' rather than 'to'. 'Stick on the wall' is the proper phrase. Using the correct preposition improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And it also and I also make sure that I stick to the schedule because if I tend to do so, I complete all the tasks of that given day and do my work.

✓ I also make sure that I stick to the schedule because if I do so, I complete all the tasks of that given day and do my work.

The original sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect pronoun usage ('if I tend to do so'). The phrase 'if I do so' is more appropriate here. Also, removing 'And it also and' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× There are a few people out there who do not make list and follow it.

✓ There are a few people out there who do not make lists and follow them.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'people' (plural). Also, the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer back to the plural 'lists'. This correction addresses both pluralization and pronoun agreement for clearer meaning.

× It's mainly because they like to do the task as it comes on the way and they find it easier to do it that way rather than.

✓ It's mainly because they like to do the task as it comes their way and they find it easier to do it that way rather than following a list.

The phrase 'as it comes on the way' is incorrect; 'as it comes their way' is the correct idiomatic expression. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'rather than.' Completing the comparison improves sentence completeness and clarity.

× You writing it on the paper is relatively difficult because you tend to lose the paper and I feel like when we write it on the phone it comes very handy.

✓ Writing it on paper is relatively difficult because you tend to lose the paper, and I feel like when we write it on the phone, it is very handy.

The phrase 'You writing it' is incorrect; it should be 'Writing it'. Also, 'comes very handy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'is very handy'. Adding commas improves readability. These corrections enhance grammatical correctness and clarity.