列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I really need and prevents me from wasting money on unnecessary items.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达清单如何帮助你提高效率和减少压力。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for work because it helps me organize my tasks, save time, and avoid doing unnecessary things, which makes me feel more relaxed.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的句子说明原因，并提供具体细节。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and prefer to have a more relaxed and spontaneous day.

建議: 回答中表达了偏好，但句子结构不够连贯，有重复和不完整的句子。建议使用连贯的句子表达原因，并避免重复。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can see them easily. Although I can use my laptop, using my phone distracts me since I might open apps like TikTok and waste time.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because it's more obviously for me to look what I really need so I can avoid the avoid another money for me to waste.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it's more obvious for me to see what I really need so I can avoid wasting more money.

这里“more obviously”用错了，应该用形容词“more obvious”来修饰主语的感受；另外“avoid the avoid another money for me to waste”结构混乱，正确表达是“avoid wasting more money”，即避免浪费更多的钱。建议用形容词修饰主语感受，动词后接动名词表示避免做某事。

× Yes, it's more obvious and efficient for me to look at what I should do in a day so it can help me save my time and help me don't to do the uh, don't do the unnecessary things so it also help me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, it's more obvious and efficient for me to look at what I should do in a day so it can help me save my time and help me not do the unnecessary things, so it also helps me feel relaxed.

“help me don't to do”是错误的表达，正确用法是“help me not do”，即帮助我不做某事；另外“help me feel”后面动词要用原形；“help me”后面动词不加to。建议掌握情态动词和使役动词后动词原形的用法。

× Because it will means a few stressed and they may want to have a more relaxed day in life.

✓ Because it will mean a little stress and they may want to have a more relaxed day in life.

“means”应为动词原形“mean”，因为前面有情态动词“will”；“a few stressed”错误，应该是“a little stress”，因为stress是不可数名词，表示压力。建议注意情态动词后动词用原形，以及不可数名词的量词用法。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I can always see it. Obviously I can take it on my laptop.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I can always see it. Obviously, I can take it on my laptop.

“Obviously”作为副词，句首时应加逗号以分隔，增强语义清晰度。建议注意副词在句首时的标点使用。

× If I have a list on my phone, I will. It will worry me because I may open the Tiktok to waste time.

✓ If I have a list on my phone, it will worry me because I may open TikTok and waste time.

“I will.”句子不完整，缺少谓语；应将两句合并，主语明确为“it”，指代“list”；“open the Tiktok”中“the”不需要，且“TikTok”首字母大写。建议注意句子完整性和专有名词的正确用法。