列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“prefer to shopping”应为“prefer to shop”，且表达“it loads of flexible”不清晰。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时回答应更简洁自然。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop freely and discover new things.

建議: 回答中动词形式错误较多，如“like to making”应为“like making”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法准确性，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I like making lists when I work or study because they help me save time and improve my efficiency.

建議: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，句子不通顺，且逻辑不清晰。建议学习正确的句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and enjoy finding unusual or special things without restrictions.

建議: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但有小的语法错误，如“need write”应为“need to write”。建议注意介词和不定式的正确使用，使表达更准确。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because digital apps are convenient and easy to carry. I can edit my lists anytime and add important tasks whenever needed.

× I prefer to shopping freely and discovering something new.

✓ I prefer to shop freely and discover something new.

动词prefer后面接动词不定式to do，不能用动名词形式doing。这里应使用动词原形shop和discover。

× I think making a list in shop for shopping will make me under control and it loads of flexible.

✓ I think making a list when shopping will help me stay in control and be more flexible.

短语中in shop用法错误，应使用when shopping表示“购物时”；under control前应加stay表示“保持控制”；loads of flexible用法错误，应该用be more flexible表示“更灵活”。

× Yes, I really like to making a list when I'm working or study.

✓ Yes, I really like making a list when I'm working or studying.

动词like后面接动名词making，而不是to making；study应改为现在分词studying以保持与前面working一致的形式。

× It can really save time and effort and also it improves my efficiency when I'm work.

✓ It can really save time and effort and also it improves my efficiency when I'm working.

短语when I'm work中，work应使用现在分词working，表示正在进行的动作。

× Following the list steps also make me carefully working and more efficiently.

✓ Following the list steps also makes me work carefully and more efficiently.

主语Following the list steps是单数，谓语动词应为makes；make后接动词原形work，而不是副词carefully后接动名词working；more efficiently是副词短语修饰动词。

× Because they don't like organize something and it makes their under control.

✓ Because they don't like to organize things and it makes them lose control.

like后接动词不定式to organize；organize后应接复数名词things；it makes their under control表达不正确，应改为it makes them lose control，意为“使他们失去控制”。

× Because they don't like organize something and it makes their under control.

✓ Because they don't like to organize things and it makes them lose control.

their是形容词性物主代词，不能单独作宾语，应该用宾格them。

× Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do something flexibility and also they want to find something unusual or special 1 making a list where restrictive then.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things flexibly and also want to find something unusual or special rather than making a list which is restrictive.

prefer后接动词不定式或动名词，这里用do things flexibly；flexibility是名词，需用副词flexibly修饰动词do；句中1应为rather than，表示“而不是”；making a list where restrictive表达不正确，应改为making a list which is restrictive。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because using a digital app is more convenient and easy to carry.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because using a digital app is more convenient and easy to carry.

此句无明显语法错误，符合语法规则。

× I can edit it everywhere. For example, if I need write something important or notice some important tasks, I can add it in my phone.

✓ I can edit it everywhere. For example, if I need to write something important or notice some important tasks, I can add them to my phone.

need后应接动词不定式to write；notice后应接宾语some important tasks；add后接宾语时应用复数them代替it；add to my phone表示“添加到手机里”，而不是in my phone。