列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“don't like make”应为“don't like to make”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且避免语法错误。

範例: No, I don't like to make a list when I go shopping because I find it troublesome and time-consuming, so I usually just buy what I need spontaneously.

建議: 回答结构基本合理，但表达不够流畅，且部分句子不自然，如“can let me know”应改为“helps me know”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me know what tasks I should complete, when to do them, and how to proceed next.

建議: 回答内容较好，但连接词使用不足，句子之间衔接不够自然。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so that”使表达更连贯。

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming, so they prefer to spend their time doing more interesting things.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“more clearly”应为“clearer”，“easy convenient”应为“more convenient”。建议注意语法和用词准确性，避免口头语。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I think it's clearer and more convenient for me to organize and access them anytime.

× No, I don't like make a list when I'm shopping because I think it's troublesome and a waste of time so I just go to the shop without I need it.

✓ No, I don't like making a list when I'm shopping because I think it's troublesome and a waste of time so I just go to the shop without needing it.

动词 'like' 后面应该接动名词形式（动词+ing），而不是动词原形。这里 'like make' 应改为 'like making'。

× No, I don't like make a list when I'm shopping because I think it's troublesome and a waste of time so I just go to the shop without I need it.

✓ No, I don't like making a list when I'm shopping because I think it's troublesome and a waste of time so I just go to the shop without needing it.

短语 'without I need it' 结构不正确，'without' 后面应接动名词或名词短语，故改为 'without needing it'。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It is effective because it can let me know what I should do, at what time and next how to do.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It is effective because it can let me know what I should do, at what time, and next how to do it.

句尾缺少宾语 'it'，使句子不完整。应补充 'how to do it'。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It is effective because it can let me know what I should do, at what time and next how to do.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It is effective because it can let me know what I should do, at what time, and next how to do it.

列举时应使用逗号分隔，且 'at what time and next how to do' 结构不清晰，需加逗号和补充宾语。

× In my opinion, they think it is troublesome and time consuming. They can leave the time to do other interesting things.

✓ In my opinion, they think it is troublesome and time-consuming. They can save the time to do other interesting things.

'time consuming' 应连写为复合形容词 'time-consuming'。另外，'leave the time' 用法不当，应改为 'save the time'。

× I like making a list of my phone because I think it is, uh, more clearly and umm, and the easy convenient for me.

✓ I like making a list on my phone because I think it is, uh, clearer and, umm, easy and convenient for me.

'more clearly' 是副词，需用形容词 'clearer' 来修饰 'it'。'the easy convenient' 结构错误，应改为 'easy and convenient'。此外，介词 'of' 应改为 'on'。