列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點重複，建議可以更自然且精簡地表達，避免使用不必要的字詞，例如「target」在這裡不太自然。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me find what I need quickly and saves time.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和不流暢的地方，建議使用正確的語法並且用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: Yes, I often make a to-do list when I study or work because it helps me concentrate and clarifies my goals for the day, so I can achieve them efficiently.

建議: 回答有點冗長且語句不夠清晰，建議簡化句子並使用連接詞讓邏輯更清楚。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act based on their mood, and having a fixed plan might make them feel stressed.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當（如“Clarks”），建議使用正確詞彙並簡潔表達。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps like reminders and notes that help me complete my tasks efficiently.

× Yes, I often make A to do list when I'm studying or working.

✓ Yes, I often make a to-do list when I'm studying or working.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens to correctly form the compound noun. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence.

× It works because it makes me more concentrate and make my mind clear that that which is my goal today and I can achieve my goals efficiently and.

✓ It works because it helps me concentrate more and makes my mind clear about my goals today so I can achieve them efficiently.

The verb 'concentrate' needs to be in the base form after 'helps me'. Also, 'make my mind clear that that which is my goal today' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be rephrased to 'makes my mind clear about my goals today'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my opinion, I think some people prefer to do things depending on their mood and their situation, so having at least to tell them what they need to do, what they're going to do, may make them stressed.

✓ In my opinion, I think some people prefer to do things depending on their mood and situation, so having a list to tell them what they need to do and what they're going to do may make them stressed.

The phrase 'having at least to tell them' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'having a list to tell them' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'their situation' can be simplified to 'situation' for naturalness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because there's a lot of convenient applications on smartphones.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are a lot of convenient applications on smartphones.

The phrase 'there's a lot of' is incorrect because 'applications' is plural; it should be 'there are a lot of'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to plural nouns.

× There's reminders, notes and Clarks that can remind me to do to complete all my goals more completely.

✓ There are reminders, notes, and calendars that can remind me to complete all my goals more effectively.

'There's' should be 'There are' because the subject is plural. 'Clarks' is likely a typo for 'calendars'. The phrase 'to do to complete' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'to complete'. Also, 'more completely' is awkward; 'more effectively' is a better choice here.