列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تتجنب التردد والكلمات الزائدة مثل "uh" و"uh uh"، وركز على إجابة واضحة ومباشرة. استخدم جمل قصيرة ومترابطة لتكون إجابتك أكثر طبيعية وفعالية.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I go shopping to remember all the items I need and to stay organized.

建議: حاول استخدام كلمات دقيقة وصحيحة مثل "realist" التي قد تكون غير مناسبة هنا، وابتعد عن الأخطاء النحوية. استخدم جمل واضحة مع ترتيب منطقي للأفكار مع ربطها بكلمات وصل.

範例: I don't usually write lists for work, but I plan tasks in my mind by prioritizing what I should do first, then the less important tasks follow.

建議: حاول أن تكون أكثر تحديداً في الأسباب واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار. تجنب التكرار مثل "their their" وقدم أمثلة أو أسباب واضحة.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to work spontaneously without planning their tasks or goals.

建議: تجنب التردد والكلمات الزائدة مثل "uh" و"etcetera"، وكن أكثر وضوحاً وترتيباً في إجابتك. استخدم جمل مترابطة مع أسباب واضحة لاختيارك.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone using the notes app because my phone is always with me, so I can easily check my list anytime.

× Sometimes I make a list when I go shopping in order to, uh, identify everything I want and also to, uh uh, to remind everything I want.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I go shopping in order to, uh, identify everything I want and also to, uh uh, remind myself of everything I want.

The verb 'remind' requires an object, and when referring to oneself, it should be followed by a reflexive pronoun like 'myself' and a preposition 'of' before the object. So, 'remind everything I want' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself of everything I want.' This corrects the verb usage and preposition use.

× I'm not a realist. Sometimes I make a list in my mind for my work, for what I should be do firstly, then what is the the priority of me and then the other things come gradually.

✓ I'm not a realist. Sometimes I make a list in my mind for my work, for what I should do first, then what my priorities are, and then the other things come gradually.

The phrase 'should be do' is incorrect; it should be 'should do' (verb form). 'Firstly' is better replaced with 'first' for natural usage. 'The priority of me' is incorrect; it should be 'my priorities' to correctly use possessive pronouns and plural form. This corrects verb form, pronoun use, and pluralization.

× Maybe they feel that it is something useless or it may waste their time, so they prefer to do anything randomly without listing their their work or their needs or their goals.

✓ Maybe they feel that it is something useless or that it may waste their time, so they prefer to do things randomly without listing their work, needs, or goals.

The phrase 'do anything randomly' is awkward; 'do things randomly' is more natural. Also, 'listing their their work' has a repeated word and should be 'listing their work.' The sentence is improved by removing redundancy and correcting pronoun use.

× Honestly, I prefer to make it on my phone in the, uh, notes application and make it as, uh, number 123 and etcetera in order to, uh, remind it to remember it.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to make it on my phone in the notes application and list items as number 1, 2, 3, etc., in order to remember them.

The phrase 'make it as number 123 and etcetera' is unclear and incorrect; 'list items as number 1, 2, 3, etc.' is clearer. Also, 'remind it to remember it' is incorrect; 'remember them' is appropriate. Prepositions and verb usage are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Sorry, because, uh, my mobile phone is more close to me every time, everywhere.

✓ Sorry, because, uh, my mobile phone is closer to me all the time, everywhere.

The phrase 'more close' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'close' is 'closer.' Also, 'every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context. This corrects adjective comparative form and preposition use.