列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "prevent me from impulsive purchases" which should be "prevent impulsive purchases." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, "because" and "so." Try to vary your vocabulary slightly and keep sentences shorter for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and avoid impulsive buys. For instance, I often get tempted by snacks or drinks, so having a list keeps me on track.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and wordy, especially with "manage my time" mentioned twice. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrasing such as "for anticipating."

範例: Yes, I make a list daily before work because it helps me plan my tasks and stay focused, which improves my time management throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is understandable but quite long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to break it into shorter sentences and use linking words like "because" and "so" more effectively. Also, avoid phrases like "time consuming action" and use "time-consuming." Be more specific and natural in your explanation.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and tedious, especially if they are unsure what to write down. Therefore, they prefer not to make lists at all.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "Are used to mark it" and "I can easily to access." Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words like "but" and "because" to connect ideas logically. Be more specific about why electronic devices are preferable.

範例: I used to make lists on paper because it was easy to access and carry. However, now I prefer using electronic devices since they are more eco-friendly and allow me to customise my lists easily.

× This is because I can stay focused on what I'm going to buy and prevent me from impulsive purchases.

✓ This is because I can stay focused on what I'm going to buy and prevent myself from impulsive purchases.

The verb 'prevent' should be followed by a reflexive pronoun 'myself' to correctly indicate that the subject is preventing their own impulsive purchases. Using 'me' here is incorrect as it is an object pronoun without reflexive function.

× I am easily attracted by some appealing items like snacks or drinks, so it is important for me to make a list.

✓ I am easily attracted to some appealing items like snacks or drinks, so it is important for me to make a list.

The correct preposition after 'attracted' is 'to', not 'by'. The phrase 'attracted to' is the standard collocation in English.

× I make a list every day before I start working because I can manage my time more effectively for anticipating what I need to do on that day and also I can stay focused throughout the day and which helps me to manage my time.

✓ I make a list every day before I start working because I can manage my time more effectively by anticipating what I need to do on that day, and I can also stay focused throughout the day, which helps me to manage my time.

The sentence had incorrect conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'For anticipating' should be 'by anticipating' to indicate the method. Also, 'and which helps me' is incorrect; it should be connected properly with commas and conjunctions to clarify the meaning.

× While some people don't like making a list because they think it is a time consuming action and also they don't know what they need to mark down which is very tedious for them and so this is the main reason for them not making a list.

✓ Some people don't like making a list because they think it is a time-consuming action, and they don't know what they need to write down, which is very tedious for them. So, this is the main reason they don't make a list.

The phrase 'mark down' is less appropriate here; 'write down' is more natural. Also, the sentence was a run-on and needed to be split for clarity. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Are used to mark it on paper in the past.

✓ I used to mark it on paper in the past.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' and the auxiliary verb 'used to' is incorrectly written as 'are used to'. 'Used to' indicates a past habit, which fits the context.

× This is because I can easily to access to the information I need and also I can take it out easily.

✓ This is because I can easily access the information I need, and I can also take it out easily.

The phrase 'can easily to access to' is incorrect. The correct form is 'can easily access' without 'to' after 'can' and without 'to' after 'access'.

× But now I prefer making it on the electronic devices which is more eco friendly and also I can customize.

✓ But now I prefer making it on electronic devices, which are more eco-friendly, and I can also customise them.

The phrase 'the electronic devices' is incorrect because it refers to devices in general, so the article 'the' should be omitted. 'Eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly'. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural 'devices'. 'Customize' should be 'customise' in British English, and the object of 'customise' should be specified.