列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“with lift”应为“with it”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和正确使用代词，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone because it helps me organize my purchases better. With the list, I don't forget anything important, and it keeps me more organized.

建議: 回答中存在双重否定和语法错误，如“seldom doesn't work”表达混乱，且“travels”用词不当。建议使用简单明确的句子，避免双重否定，并用正确词汇表达“challenges”。

範例: Yes, I often make a list before starting my work, but sometimes it doesn't work because unexpected challenges can happen during tasks.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“may lazy”应为“may be lazy”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复和模糊的描述。

範例: I think some people are confident they can remember everything, so they don't feel the need to make lists. Also, some might be too lazy to write them down.

建議: 回答中句子较长且结构混乱，存在语法错误，如“more easy”应为“easier”。建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇搭配，使表达更自然。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because technology is very popular now. I always carry my phone, so it's more convenient and easier than using paper.

× Yes, I also take the list in my mobile when I go shopping because I think they can help me order the things better and with lift I can remember all the things that I will not forget to buy anything.

✓ Yes, I also take the list on my mobile when I go shopping because I think it can help me organize the things better and with it I can remember all the things so that I will not forget to buy anything.

这里“the list”是单数，后面却用了复数代词“they”，应改为单数代词“it”。另外，“take the list in my mobile”应改为“take the list on my mobile”，表示在手机上使用列表。还有“order the things better”表达不准确，改为“organize the things better”更合适。

× Yes, I often make the list before I take my work, but it seldom doesn't work because many things were not go smoothly as we expected.

✓ Yes, I often make the list before I start my work, but it seldom doesn't work because many things do not go as smoothly as we expected.

“make the list”中的“the list”应保持一致，且“take my work”表达不准确，应改为“start my work”。“were not go smoothly”时态和语法错误，应改为“do not go as smoothly”。

× When we do some tasks, there are always some new travels and challenge we have never.

✓ When we do some tasks, there are always some new troubles and challenges we have never faced.

“travels”用词不当，应为“troubles”或“problems”；“challenge”应为复数“challenges”；句尾缺少动词，补充“faced”。

× I think they may think that they are confident enough to take down other things in order that they don't need to make any lists.

✓ I think they may believe that they are confident enough to remember other things so that they don't need to make any lists.

“take down other things”用词不当，应为“remember other things”；“in order that”用法不自然，改为“so that”。

× What's more, some people may lazy to make the list.

✓ What's more, some people may be lazy to make the list.

“may lazy”缺少系动词“be”，应为“may be lazy”。

× They think they are terrible and they don't need that.

✓ They think they are fine and they don't need that.

“terrible”用词不当，表达不清，应改为“fine”或“okay”以表达他们认为自己没问题。

× I prefer to make the list on my phone, because in today's technology getting more and more popular, we seldom use a pencil and a pen, and I don't bring the book all the time, but take the mobile phone.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone, because today's technology is getting more and more popular, we seldom use a pencil and a pen, and I don't bring a notebook all the time, but take my mobile phone.

“in today's technology getting more and more popular”缺少主语和谓语，应改为“today's technology is getting more and more popular”。“bring the book”应为“bring a notebook”。

× I always already take the mobile phone, so take the list in the mobile phone will be more convenient and more easy to take.

✓ I always have my mobile phone with me, so taking the list on the mobile phone is more convenient and easier.

“I always already take the mobile phone”表达不自然，应为“I always have my mobile phone with me”。“take the list in the mobile phone”应改为“taking the list on the mobile phone”。“more easy”应为“easier”。