列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stick to my budget and prevents me from forgetting what I need. This way, I can shop efficiently without wandering around the mall.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子衔接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意语法准确性。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I am not very organized or good at remembering tasks. Therefore, I use a digital app that sends me reminders and helps me organize my daily schedule effectively.

建議: 回答表达了原因，但句子结构重复且不够简洁。建议用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming. Instead, they prefer to start working immediately without spending time planning.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更地道的表达方式。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing with a pen. It helps me feel more organized and focused on my tasks.

× I think making a list can keep my shopping within my budget and I think I'll be more organised of what I got to buy.

✓ I think making a list can keep my shopping within my budget and I think I'll be more organised about what I have to buy.

这里“organised”后面应该用介词“about”来表达“对……有条理”，而不是“of”。

× And making a shopping list avoid me of wandering around the shopping mall and thinking about what I have to buy.

✓ And making a shopping list avoids me wandering around the shopping mall and thinking about what I have to buy.

动词“avoid”后面不接介词“of”，且主语是单数“making a shopping list”，动词应加-s变为“avoids”。

× I use a digital app to help me do it. It will send me reminders and help me to organize all my things through a daily work.

✓ I use a digital app to help me do it. It sends me reminders and helps me to organize all my things through daily work.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，故“will send”改为“sends”，“help”改为“helps”。“a daily work”中“work”不可数，去掉冠词“a”。

× Well, I think the reason for that is maybe because that some people think making a list is time consuming.

✓ Well, I think the reason for that is maybe that some people think making a list is time consuming.

“maybe because that”结构不正确，应去掉“because”，只用“maybe that”表达原因。

× Well, for myself, I prefer to make a list on paper because I love the total job of a pen and paper, and I think writing down on a pen and a paper could make me feel the well organized process of making a list and I think it's very essential.

✓ Well, for myself, I prefer to make a list on paper because I love the feel of pen and paper, and I think writing down with a pen on paper makes me feel the well-organized process of making a list, and I think it's very essential.

“the total job of a pen and paper”表达不当，改为“the feel of pen and paper”更自然。“writing down on a pen and a paper”应改为“writing down with a pen on paper”。“well organized”作为形容词修饰名词时应连写为“well-organized”。