列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question, then providing clear supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating words and ensure correct sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list using the Notes app on my iPhone. I often shop at Costco, and when I'm short on time, I add items directly to the app's list feature. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by reducing filler words and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

範例: Not really. At my workplace, we use an Excel file that contains a checklist prepared by our manager. Therefore, I don't need to make a separate list; I just follow the existing checklist to complete my tasks.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinions more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons logically. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember many things easily. Additionally, it might be a matter of habit; if they never learned to make lists as children, they may not see the need to start now.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains many filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and clearly by organizing your ideas logically with linking words. Also, complete your thoughts fully to avoid confusion.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more accessible; I can create a list anytime and anywhere. Moreover, it helps me save paper, and I can store many lists without worrying about losing them.

× Yes, I usually make list with the help of an app called Notes is already is in my iPhone application.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list with the help of an app called Notes which is already in my iPhone application.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, the sentence needed a relative clause connector 'which' to link the app name and its presence in the phone.

× I usually buy the things from the Costco.

✓ I usually buy things from Costco.

The word 'things' is a general plural noun and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'Costco' as a store name does not need 'the' before it unless referring to a specific location.

× So sometimes like whenever whenever I run out of time I usually use its card option so I can add the required items to do the card.

✓ So sometimes, whenever I run out of time, I usually use its cart option so I can add the required items to the cart.

The word 'card' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'cart' for shopping. Also, 'to do the card' is incorrect; it should be 'to the cart'. The sentence also needed commas for clarity.

× So by doing that I can.

✓ So by doing that, I can shop more efficiently.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object. Adding a completion clarifies the intended meaning.

× Uh, not really, uh, because at my workplace we have an Excel file that already included one checklist.

✓ Uh, not really, uh, because at my workplace we have an Excel file that already includes a checklist.

The verb 'included' should be in present tense 'includes' to match the current state. Also, 'one checklist' is better expressed as 'a checklist' for naturalness.

× So in order to do the things, I don't need to make any separate list.

✓ So in order to do things, I don't need to make a separate list.

The phrase 'the things' is too general and unnecessary here; 'things' without 'the' is more natural. Also, 'any separate list' should be 'a separate list' because it refers to a singular countable noun.

× Instead of that, I just need to follow the regular checklist.

✓ Instead of that, I just need to follow the regular checklist.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× That's, uh, we all prepared with the help of the manager.

✓ That's something we all prepared with the help of the manager.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'something' clarifies the subject and improves sentence structure.

× I believe maybe those people have more brain power that means they can memories a lot of things.

✓ I believe maybe those people have more brain power, which means they can remember a lot of things.

The verb 'memories' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember'. Also, a comma and 'which' are needed to connect the clauses properly.

× So in that case they don't need to make any separately to remember the things.

✓ So in that case, they don't need to make any separate list to remember things.

The word 'separately' is an adverb and incorrect here; it should be the adjective 'separate' modifying 'list'. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' without 'the'.

× Apart from this, maybe some people used to do that since childhood.

✓ Apart from this, maybe some people have been used to doing that since childhood.

The phrase 'used to do' is incorrect for a habitual action continuing to present; 'have been used to doing' is the correct form. Also, 'since childhood' requires present perfect tense.

× So it's all about habits.

✓ So it's all about habits.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I really prefer to make, uh, make a list, uh, in my phone.

✓ I really prefer to make a list, uh, on my phone.

The correct preposition for using a device is 'on' rather than 'in'.

× The reason is like is accessibility, for example, uh, whenever I want to make a list, I can do it in right away.

✓ The reason is accessibility; for example, whenever I want to make a list, I can do it right away.

The phrase 'like is' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'in right away' is incorrect; 'right away' should stand alone without 'in'.

× Apart from that, I can also save a lot of paper by doing this, and the storage is another reason if I make.

✓ Apart from that, I can also save a lot of paper by doing this, and storage is another reason why I prefer it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'why I prefer it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the conjunction usage.