列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在重复和语法不够自然的问题。建议避免重复词汇，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I like making a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and focused. This way, I know exactly what to buy and avoid wasting time.

建議: 回答中有较多犹豫词和不完整句子，建议减少口头语，使用完整句子表达观点，并且明确说明理由。

範例: No, I usually keep my to-do list in my mind because I find it more convenient. However, I believe writing lists at work can improve productivity.

建議: 回答中表达了原因，但句子结构不够清晰，建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更连贯。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be stressful, especially if they are uncertain about their future career plans, which makes them hesitant.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇，句子较长且不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me. Also, I can set alarms and reminders to stay organized.

× Yes, I I really like making a list before I go shopping because that way will keep me more organized and goal oriented.

✓ Yes, I really like making a list before I go shopping because that way it will keep me more organized and goal oriented.

句子中缺少主语“it”，导致句子结构不完整。应在“that way”后加上“it”作为主语，使句子完整。

× Unfortunately, no. Uh, I prefer making a list in my brain rather than writing them down because that is more convenient for me to, uh, do and remember.

✓ Unfortunately, no. Uh, I prefer making a list in my brain rather than writing it down because that is more convenient for me to do and remember.

“a list”是单数，代词应使用“it”而非“them”，保持数的一致。

× But I do think making a list when you're at work.

✓ But I do think making a list when you're at work is helpful.

原句缺少谓语部分，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语使句子完整。

× Some people, like me, don't like making lists when it comes to study because making lists feels more stressful for us and also because we don't have clear plans for a future career, so we're really hesitated.

✓ Some people, like me, don't like making lists when it comes to study because making lists feels more stressful for us and also because we don't have clear plans for a future career, so we're really hesitant.

“hesitated”是过去式，句中应使用形容词“hesitant”来描述状态。

× I like making this on my phone because nowadays people tend to carry their phones all the time with them and also we can set alarms and reminders in our phone to keep keep ourselves more organized and make this whole process.

✓ I like making this on my phone because nowadays people tend to carry their phones with them all the time and also we can set alarms and reminders on our phone to keep ourselves more organized and make this whole process easier.

“carry their phones all the time with them”中“all the time”位置不当，应放在“with them”之前；“set alarms and reminders in our phone”应改为“on our phone”，符合习惯用法；“keep keep”重复，应去掉一个；句尾缺少补充说明，添加“easier”使句子完整。