列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, usually at the supermarket with my mom. She carries a list and buys only the items on it, which helps us avoid unnecessary purchases.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas better and avoid contradictions. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, correct grammatical mistakes and avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

範例: I don't usually make a list for school tasks; I prefer to complete assignments as they come. However, for my work, I always prepare a list to stay organized. In fact, I have been making lists since I was in first grade.

建議: Your answer is too informal and uses repetitive phrases. Avoid negative or judgmental language like 'laziness' without explanation. Instead, provide more balanced reasons and use linking words to structure your answer clearly.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous. However, making lists can improve productivity and help manage tasks effectively.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid irrelevant information like 'social media'. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit. In the past, I used to write lists on paper, but now I find digital lists more practical.

× I usually go and shop from a supermarket and when I visit there I always go with my mom.

✓ I usually go and shop at a supermarket and when I visit there I always go with my mom.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to shopping locations. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place where shopping happens.

× My mom always accompany me over there.

✓ My mom always accompanies me over there.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'My mom'. 'Accompany' should be 'accompanies' for third person singular.

× She always have a list in her hand and she always buy the precise things that is on the list and never go exceeds or below it.

✓ She always has a list in her hand and she always buys the precise things that are on the list and never goes beyond or below it.

The verbs 'have', 'buy', and 'is' must agree with the singular subject 'She'. They should be 'has', 'buys', and 'are' respectively. Also, 'go exceeds or below' is incorrect; it should be 'goes beyond or below'.

× I always do and go in a flow.

✓ I always do and go with the flow.

The correct preposition with 'go' in this context is 'with', not 'in'. The phrase is 'go with the flow'.

× The things that ma'am told me, I always come home, I complete it and submit it to ma'am in the school next day.

✓ The things that ma'am told me, I always come home, complete them and submit them to ma'am at school the next day.

'Things' is plural, so pronouns referring to it should be plural 'them'. Also, 'in the school' should be 'at school' and 'next day' should be 'the next day'.

× People don't like to make lists because of their laziness or something.

✓ People don't like to make lists because of their laziness or something else.

The phrase 'or something' is incomplete; 'or something else' is more appropriate to express an additional reason.

× They just want to do in the floor.

✓ They just want to go with the flow.

The phrase 'do in the floor' is incorrect. The intended expression is 'go with the flow' meaning to act without planning.

× Nowadays social media electronic devices are gaining a lot of popularity.

✓ Nowadays, electronic devices like social media apps are gaining a lot of popularity.

The phrase 'social media electronic devices' is unclear. It is better to say 'electronic devices like social media apps' for clarity.

× So I always use to make a list and nowadays also I'm making a list only on my phone.

✓ So I always used to make a list and nowadays I am making a list only on my phone.

The phrase 'use to' is incorrect in present tense; it should be 'used to' for past habitual actions.

× I never used a paper or a pen to make list.

✓ I never used paper or a pen to make a list.

'Used' is correct past tense, but 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'.