列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, instead of 'move the list', say 'make a list' or 'use a list'. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because I find it very convenient and it helps me remember everything I need.

建議: Focus on making your answer clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'made me recognize without any discussion'.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they save time and help me stay organized without needing to ask others for reminders.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more logical. Also, avoid repeating 'I think so' and be more specific in your explanation.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe their memory is good enough to remember tasks. However, I think making lists is helpful because it provides a clear plan for the day.

建議: Work on clarity and coherence. Avoid unclear phrases like 'If they are fat to make a list on a form of way to use'. Clearly state your preference and reasons using simple, natural language.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't forget my list. Sometimes I use paper, but the phone is more convenient.

× Yes, I always move the list because I think that's a convenient way when I when I'm going out and it's helpful for me.

✓ Yes, I always make the list because I think that's a convenient way when I'm going out and it's helpful for me.

The verb 'move' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'make' when referring to creating a list. Using the correct verb improves clarity and meaning.

× Yes, I think so. It worked because if I'm making a list that saved the times and made me recognize without any discussion and it shows me.

✓ Yes, I think so. It works because if I make a list, it saves time and helps me remember without any discussion, and it shows me.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tenses. Since the question is about habitual action, present tense should be used consistently. Also, 'saved the times' is incorrect; it should be 'saves time'. 'Made me recognize' is unclear and replaced with 'helps me remember' for clarity.

× So some people don't like the list because they think so they have good memory to recognize the things.

✓ So some people don't like lists because they think they have a good memory to remember things.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to refer generally to the concept. Also, 'recognize the things' is awkward; 'remember things' is more appropriate. 'They think so they have' is corrected to 'they think they have' for clarity.

× But I think so everyone should make the list because it gives you a good way to follow the rest of the day.

✓ But I think everyone should make a list because it gives you a good way to follow the rest of the day.

The phrase 'think so everyone' is incorrect; 'think everyone' is correct. Also, 'make the list' is better as 'make a list' when speaking generally.

× If they are fat to make a list on a form of way to use, I don't.

✓ If there is a convenient way to make a list, I do it.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('fat' instead of 'fit' or 'convenient'). The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Maybe sometime I can fold with the paper, but for sure I don't forget my phone.

✓ Maybe sometimes I can write on paper, but for sure I don't forget my phone.

'Fold with the paper' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'write on paper'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× So the phone is the good way to make the list.

✓ So the phone is a good way to make a list.

'The good way' is incorrect; 'a good way' is appropriate when speaking generally. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' for generalization.