列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lặp lại ý. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid impulse buying. By sticking to the list, I can focus on what I need and shop more efficiently.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "like sometimes" mà nên dùng "sometimes" hoặc "I sometimes".

範例: Sometimes I make a work list to prioritize tasks. This helps me complete important jobs first and improves my productivity.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và "you know" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được rút gọn và sử dụng các từ nối để tăng tính mạch lạc.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and follow their feelings. This approach helps them feel more relaxed and flexible.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: It's hard to choose, but I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. Also, I find it more relaxing than using my phone.

× Yeah, of course is an essential thing.

✓ Yeah, of course it is an essential thing.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before the verb 'is'. In English, sentences require a subject to be grammatically correct. Adding 'it' clarifies what is essential.

× By arranging a list, I can't avoid, uh, impulse purchasing when shopping.

✓ By arranging a list, I can avoid, uh, impulse purchasing when shopping.

The modal verb 'can't' contradicts the intended meaning. The speaker means that arranging a list helps to avoid impulse buying, so 'can' should be used instead of 'can't'.

× By sticking to the plan, I will never be distracted by unnecessary items, so my shopping will be more efficient.

✓ By sticking to the plan, I will not be distracted by unnecessary items, so my shopping will be more efficient.

The phrase 'will never be distracted' is acceptable but 'will not be distracted' is more natural and formal in this context. No major grammar error here, so this is optional.

× Like sometimes I do so because when arranging a work list, I can prioritize the most important thing and do it first.

✓ Sometimes I do so because when arranging a work list, I can prioritize the most important things and do them first.

The phrase 'the most important thing' should be plural 'things' because there can be multiple important tasks. Also, 'do it first' should be 'do them first' to agree with the plural subject.

× By doing so, my work is done more efficiently and therefore enhancing my productivity at work.

✓ By doing so, my work is done more efficiently and therefore my productivity at work is enhanced.

The phrase 'and therefore enhancing my productivity' is a sentence fragment. It needs a subject and verb to be complete. Changing it to 'and therefore my productivity at work is enhanced' corrects the structure.

× Umm, you know, some people just don't enjoy making a list because they want to really want to go with the flow and follow their feelings.

✓ Umm, you know, some people just don't enjoy making a list because they really want to go with the flow and follow their feelings.

The phrase 'they want to really want to' is redundant. Removing the extra 'want to' clarifies the sentence.

× They just want to do the things they feel right at that moment instead of plan everything in advance.

✓ They just want to do the things they feel are right at that moment instead of planning everything in advance.

The verb 'feel' needs a complement 'are right' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'plan' should be in gerund form 'planning' after 'instead of'.

× But this way they will get more relaxed and spontaneous.

✓ But this way, they will be more relaxed and spontaneous.

The verb 'get' is less appropriate here; 'be' is better to describe a state. Adding a comma after 'way' improves readability.

× More hard to choose.

✓ It's harder to choose.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It's' and changing 'more hard' to 'harder' corrects the sentence.

× I would go with on paper by doing I, I.

✓ I would go with paper by doing, I, I.

The phrase 'go with on paper' is incorrect; it should be 'go with paper' or 'go with writing on paper'. The phrase 'by doing I, I' is unclear and likely a filler or error; it should be removed or clarified.

× I really like the feelings of jotting something down by hands, but this way I can enhance my memory.

✓ I really like the feeling of jotting something down by hand, and this way I can enhance my memory.

The phrase 'by hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by hand'. Also, 'feelings' should be singular 'feeling' in this context. Using 'and' instead of 'but' fits better logically.

× I can't remember things more efficiently when go shopping and I find the traditional way is more relaxed compared to using my phone.

✓ I can't remember things as efficiently when I go shopping, and I find the traditional way is more relaxing compared to using my phone.

The phrase 'when go shopping' is missing the subject 'I'. Also, 'more relaxed' should be 'more relaxing' to describe the way. Adding commas improves clarity.