列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy like 'enlist my necessities' and instead say 'make a shopping list'.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it restrictive and time-consuming. Instead, I prefer to shop spontaneously and take advantage of store discounts and promotions.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your process clearly. Also, avoid repeating words like 'task' unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work and prioritize tasks based on their complexity. I prefer to complete the complex tasks first so that I can finish everything on time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas better using linking words and complete your thoughts. Avoid repeating phrases like 'some people like me' multiple times.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their spontaneity. Moreover, if they cannot complete all tasks, it causes stress, especially when unexpected tasks arise and disrupt the list.

建議: Your answer is good but incomplete and slightly repetitive. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'easily' multiple times.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. This way, I don't need to carry pen and paper, and I can quickly add or rearrange items as needed.

× I usually don't prefer to enlist my necessities when I go to shop because I find it more restrictive and time consuming.

✓ I usually don't prefer enlisting my necessities when I go shopping because I find it more restrictive and time consuming.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing general preferences. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' as 'go' is followed by the gerund form to indicate the activity. This correction improves naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× For my shopping, I prefer to rely on the stores discounts and promotions.

✓ For my shopping, I prefer to rely on the store's discounts and promotions.

The word 'stores' should be possessive to indicate that the discounts and promotions belong to the store. Adding an apostrophe and 's' makes it 'store's'. This is a common error in possessive forms.

× Most of the time I make a list whenever I'm working and I prioritize my task based on the complexity of the task and usually the complex task.

✓ Most of the time I make a list whenever I'm working and I prioritize my tasks based on the complexity of the tasks, usually the complex ones.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because the speaker refers to multiple tasks. Also, 'the complex task' should be plural or rephrased to 'the complex ones' to match the plural context. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and consistency.

× I prefer to do it earlier so that I can easily complete my task within the time and.

✓ I prefer to do it earlier so that I can easily complete my tasks within the time.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Removing 'and' and correcting 'task' improves sentence completeness and clarity.

× Some people like me don't like making list because it makes them more restrictive and some people like to be more spontaneous and flexible while they shop.

✓ Some people like me don't like making lists because it makes them feel more restricted, and some people like to be more spontaneous and flexible while they shop.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'makes them more restrictive' is incorrect; it should be 'makes them feel more restricted' to correctly express the feeling. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× And for more people like me, they feel it's stressful if they are unable to complete the task.

✓ Also, for more people like me, it feels stressful if they are unable to complete the tasks.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal; 'Also' is more appropriate. 'They feel it's stressful' is better expressed as 'it feels stressful' to avoid ambiguity. 'The task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. These changes improve formality and clarity.

× And sometimes it happens, then an irrelevant task comes up and the list becomes.

✓ Sometimes this happens when an irrelevant task comes up, and the list becomes disrupted.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'when an irrelevant task comes up' clarifies the cause, and completing the sentence with 'the list becomes disrupted' provides a clear conclusion. Removing 'And' at the start improves formality.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is every time with me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is always with me.

The phrase 'every time with me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'always with me' to indicate constant presence. This correction improves naturalness and correctness.

× I don't have to carry a separate pen or paper for this and on a digital list I can easily add it on the runtime.

✓ I don't have to carry a separate pen or paper for this, and on a digital list, I can easily add items in real time.

The phrase 'add it on the runtime' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'add items in real time' to indicate immediate addition. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I can easily manage and rearrange my things according to the availability of the products and moreover.

✓ I can easily manage and rearrange my things according to the availability of the products.

The sentence ends with 'and moreover' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'and moreover' completes the sentence properly. This correction improves sentence completeness and clarity.