列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it's an essential things' nên là 'it's an essential thing' hoặc 'it's essential'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số câu không rõ nghĩa như 'I won't by sticking to the plan'. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and organized. By following the list, I avoid buying unnecessary items and impulse purchases. This way, my shopping is more efficient and saves me time.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'I'm not for sure' nên là 'I'm not sure'. Câu cuối 'my work is my fashion' không rõ nghĩa và gây nhầm lẫn. Hãy sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

範例: I'm not always sure, but sometimes I make a list to prioritize my tasks. This helps me focus on the most important work first, so I can stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp như 'making alerts' nên là 'making lists', 'owning to' nên là 'owing to'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and follow their moods. They enjoy doing things as they feel in the moment, which makes them feel more relaxed and less stressed than planning everything in advance.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng như 'notting' nên là 'noting', câu 'I can, umm, take to the boss' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và nói ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: If I had to choose, I would prefer making a list on paper because I enjoy writing things down by hand. It feels more personal and helps me remember better than using my phone.

× Yeah, of course it's an essential things.

✓ Yeah, of course it's an essential thing.

The word 'things' is plural, but 'an' indicates a singular noun should follow. Therefore, 'things' should be changed to the singular 'thing' to match the article 'an'.

× Like by arranging a shopping list I can keep my mind focused and well organized.

✓ Like arranging a shopping list, I can keep my mind focused and well organized.

The phrase 'by arranging' is correct but can be simplified to 'arranging' to sound more natural in this context. The preposition 'by' is unnecessary here and removing it improves sentence flow.

× When shopping, I will avoid impulse chasing.

✓ When shopping, I will avoid impulse buying.

The phrase 'impulse chasing' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'impulse buying' which means purchasing items spontaneously without planning.

× I won't by sticking to the plan.

✓ I won't buy anything outside the plan.

The sentence is unclear and uses 'by' incorrectly. The intended meaning is likely 'I won't buy items not on the plan.' The correction clarifies the meaning and uses 'buy' correctly as a verb.

× I will never get it started by unnecessary items.

✓ I will never start by buying unnecessary items.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clearer structure, indicating the action of starting with unnecessary items is avoided.

× Like I mean, sometimes by making a list I can prioritize my work, the most important things to do first.

✓ Like I mean, sometimes by making a list I can prioritize my work, putting the most important things first.

The phrase 'the most important things to do first' is awkward. Changing it to 'putting the most important things first' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So my work always get done well organized, I can stay focused and therefore my work is my fashion.

✓ So my work always gets done well organized, I can stay focused and therefore my work is my passion.

'Work' is singular, so the verb should be 'gets' not 'get'. Also, 'my fashion' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'my passion', which makes sense in context.

× It's like some people don't like don't enjoy making alerts, just owning to the fact that they prefer to go with the flow and follow their moods, you know?

✓ It's like some people don't enjoy making lists, just owing to the fact that they prefer to go with the flow and follow their moods, you know?

The phrase 'don't like don't enjoy' is redundant and incorrect. 'Making alerts' is incorrect; the intended word is 'making lists'. 'Owning' should be 'owing' to mean 'because of'.

× For example, they might enjoy doing whatever feels right at the moment instead of planning everything in advance, so this way they feel more relaxed and spontaneous when shopping.

✓ For example, they might enjoy doing whatever feels right at the moment instead of planning everything in advance; this way, they feel more relaxed and spontaneous when shopping.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved by replacing the comma with a semicolon and adding a comma after 'this way' for better clarity and flow.

× I don't know, but were I to choose, I would go with on paper.

✓ I don't know, but were I to choose, I would go with paper.

The phrase 'go with on paper' is incorrect. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'go with paper' or 'go with a paper list'.

× I love the feelings of, uh, notting down on the paper so when you go shopping I can, umm, take to the boss.

✓ I love the feeling of, uh, noting down on paper so when I go shopping I can, umm, refer to the list.

'Notting' is a misspelling of 'noting'. 'Feelings' should be singular 'feeling' in this context. 'Take to the boss' is unclear; likely intended is 'refer to the list' or similar. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper'.

× What I've done is like classical, you know.

✓ What I've done is like classical, you know.

The sentence is unclear and 'classical' is not the correct adjective here. Possibly the speaker meant 'traditional' or 'classic'. However, since it is a spoken transcript, this may be acceptable as is.