列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且直接回答问题。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can remember everything I need to buy.

建議: 回答不够连贯，有重复且未完整表达观点。建议简洁明了地说明当前情况和未来看法。

範例: I'm currently a student, so I don't make lists for work. However, I think making lists will be helpful when I start working in the future.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法并具体说明原因。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但“numerous troubles”用词不当，且逻辑有误。建议使用更准确的词汇并完善理由。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I won't lose them like paper lists.

× I would like to say I never make a list when when I when I'm when I'm shopping.

✓ I would like to say I never make a list when I'm shopping.

句子中重复了多个'when'，属于句子结构错误，影响表达清晰。应删除多余的'when'，使句子简洁通顺。

× I think make a list could not really help me as I can remember all the things to buy.

✓ I think making a list could not really help me as I can remember all the things to buy.

动词短语作主语时应使用动名词形式'making'，而不是动词原形'make'。

× Yes, I I would like to say that I'm a student now, so I so I'm not working right now, but for but in the future I think making a list making a list for work is a good way to.

✓ Yes, I would like to say that I'm a student now, so I'm not working right now, but in the future I think making a list for work is a good way.

句子中有重复词语和多余的连接词，导致句子结构混乱，应删除重复和多余部分，使句子通顺。

× They may think making a list bring numerous numerous troubles and it's really depend on their personalities, isn't it?

✓ They may think making a list brings numerous troubles and it really depends on their personalities, doesn't it?

动词与主语不一致，'making a list'为第三人称单数，动词应加's'；'depend on'后主语为第三人称单数，动词也应加's'；'isn't it'用于附加疑问句不合适，应改为'doesn't it'。

× They may think making a list bring numerous numerous troubles and it's really depend on their personalities, isn't it?

✓ They may think making a list brings numerous troubles and it really depends on their personalities, doesn't it?

'numerous'重复使用，属于量词使用错误，应去掉重复的'numorous'。

× I would like to say I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I would like to say I prefer to make a list using paper.

习惯表达中，'make a list on paper'虽可理解，但更自然的表达是'use paper'或'using paper'。

× I think it's very convenient and can avoid numerous troubles such as lost papers.

✓ I think it's very convenient and can avoid numerous troubles such as losing papers.

'lost papers'应改为动名词形式'losing papers'，表示避免丢失纸张的情况。