列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use past or present tense consistently and avoid repeating phrases. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me know exactly what I need to buy. Additionally, it allows me to organize my purchases and keep track of my budget, so I don't overspend.

建議: Your answer shows good content but lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences. Also, avoid repeating words like 'actually' and be more concise.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work. I include specific times for each task, such as working on math from 9:00 to 10:00. This helps me stay organized and understand what I need to do throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to finish your thoughts and use linking words to explain your ideas logically. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe their memory is enough to organize and remember tasks. However, I learned that while the brain helps plan, lists can improve organization and reduce forgetfulness.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more formal vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'kinda like' and improve sentence flow for a more natural response.

範例: I have tried both methods, but I prefer making lists on paper because it gives me a tactile experience, which helps me remember better. Additionally, using my phone can be distracting due to social media, so paper lists help me stay focused.

× I do make a list when I went to a shop because that came let me know like what kind of thing I want to buy and organizing the everything there's something I should buy and also to like count like a budget, like how much money should I bring.

✓ I do make a list when I go to a shop because that helps me know what kind of things I want to buy and organize everything I should buy, and also to count the budget, like how much money I should bring.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'went' when referring to a habitual action, which should be in the present tense 'go'. Also, 'came let me know' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me know'. The phrase 'organizing the everything there's something I should buy' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'organize everything I should buy'. The modal verb phrase 'how much money should I bring' should be 'how much money I should bring' to fit the sentence structure.

× And also that help me just organizing and help me understanding what.

✓ And also that helps me just organize and helps me understand what.

The verb 'help' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the gerund. Therefore, 'help me just organizing' should be 'helps me just organize' and 'help me understanding' should be 'helps me understand'. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'helps' instead of 'help'.

× I think some people just they don't like making a list just because they think their brain will help them to organize and remember everything.

✓ I think some people just don't like making a list because they think their brain will help them organize and remember everything.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. Also, 'help them to organize' is better as 'help them organize' for natural English usage.

× And at 1st I believe that too.

✓ And at first, I believed that too.

The phrase 'at 1st' should be written as 'at first'. Since the action refers to a past belief, the past tense 'believed' is appropriate instead of the present tense 'believe'.

× But once I was reading a magazine that told me like brain, just that brain is just helping you like thinking what you want to do. But it can.

✓ But once I was reading a magazine that said the brain only helps you think about what you want to do, but it cannot do everything.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Told me like brain, just that brain is just helping you like thinking' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I tried both before but I prefer making a list on a paper because it's kinda like you have more touch with it and you will remember it more than on your cell phone.

✓ I tried both before, but I prefer making a list on paper because it's kind of like you have more touch with it and you will remember it more than on your cell phone.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper' without an article. Also, 'kinda' should be 'kind of' for formal correctness.

× Because it was using a cell phone it would distract me for like using social media and wasting a lot of time on it so I prefer using the paper.

✓ Because when I use a cell phone, it distracts me by making me use social media and waste a lot of time, so I prefer using paper.

The phrase 'Because it was using a cell phone' is incorrect; it should be 'when I use a cell phone'. Also, 'distract me for like using social media' is ungrammatical; it should be 'distracts me by making me use social media'. 'Using the paper' is better as 'using paper' without the article.