列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但句子结构有些重复，且有语法错误，如“save a lot of time”应为“saves a lot of time”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me shop more efficiently and saves a lot of time. Additionally, it prevents me from forgetting any items I need to buy.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a to do list”中的冠词使用不当，以及“ability of manage time”应为“ability to manage time”。建议注意冠词和动词不定式的正确使用，同时尝试使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I usually create a to-do list on my smartphone app, which helps me improve my work efficiency because I can complete tasks one by one and enhance my ability to manage time.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且“more stressful”用法不够准确。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并丰富细节，使回答更具体和自然。

範例: I believe some people avoid making lists because they prefer a less stressful lifestyle and a slower pace. For them, making lists might add pressure and make them feel more anxious.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“which have”应为“which has”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，避免句子碎片化，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer to make my to-do list on my smartphone app because it has more functions, such as reminding me with music, and it's easier to update and manage.

× Well, normally I will make a shopping list before I go to shop, which makes my shopping more efficient and save a lot of time.

✓ Well, normally I will make a shopping list before I go shopping, which makes my shopping more efficient and saves a lot of time.

句中“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go shopping”是固定搭配，表示去购物。动词“makes”后面主语是“my shopping”，谓语动词应与主语一致，故“save”应改为“saves”。这是单复数问题。

× Moreover, it could avoid forgetting something I want to buy.

✓ Moreover, it can help me avoid forgetting something I want to buy.

“could avoid”用法不当，表达能力或可能性时应使用“can”，且“avoid”后应接动词原形，故加“help me avoid”。这是情态动词用法问题。

× Well, I'd like to make A to do list in my smartphone app which could help me improve my working efficiency because I could finish tasks in this list 1 by 1 and improve my ability of manage time.

✓ Well, I'd like to make a to-do list in my smartphone app which can help me improve my working efficiency because I can finish tasks in this list one by one and improve my ability to manage time.

“A to do list”中“to do list”应连写为“to-do list”。“could”表达能力时用法不当，应改为“can”。“ability of manage time”应改为“ability to manage time”，这是固定搭配。数字“1 by 1”应写为“one by one”。这是单复数和情态动词用法问题。

× Wow, I think these people don't like too much stress in their life and they want a slow pace of life.

✓ Wow, I think these people don't like too much stress in their lives and they want a slow pace of life.

“their life”应为复数“their lives”，因为指代多个人的生活。

× Making a list could make them more stressful.

✓ Making a list could make them more stressed.

“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人，句中应用“stressed”表示人感到压力。

× I'd like to make my To Do List in my smartphone app because which have more function such as reminding me with songs and it's easier to update and manage.

✓ I'd like to make my To Do List in my smartphone app because it has more functions such as reminding me with songs and it's easier to update and manage.

“which have”主语应为单数“it”，谓语动词应为“has”。“function”应为复数“functions”。这是单复数问题。