列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'prevents me to buy' 대신 'prevents me from buying'를 사용해야 하며, 'some other stuffs'는 'other things'로 수정하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장을 조금 더 간결하게 다듬으면 좋겠습니다.

範例: I always make a list when I shop because it helps me know exactly what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'It's sometimes work'는 'It sometimes works'로 수정해야 하며, 'I made a list'는 'I make' 또는 'I have made'로 바꾸는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 'lazy person'이라는 표현은 부정적으로 들릴 수 있으니 다른 표현으로 바꾸는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It sometimes helps me stay organized, but other times I find it hard to follow because I get distracted.

建議: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 반복되는 단어와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'making lists requires lots of energy and stress' 대신 'making lists can be tiring and stressful'로 표현하면 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 두 문장을 연결하는 접속사를 사용하면 더 논리적입니다.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be tiring and stressful, as they have to think carefully about what tasks they need to complete.

建議: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'more easier'와 'such more easier'는 잘못된 표현으로, 각각 'easier'와 'much easier'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 다듬는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to delete items when I'm done and to make corrections if needed.

× Making a list allows me to know exactly what I need to buy and it prevents me to buy some other stuffs that I don't need.

✓ Making a list allows me to know exactly what I need to buy and it prevents me from buying some other stuff that I don't need.

'Prevents' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.

× Making a list allows me to know exactly what I need to buy and it prevents me to buy some other stuffs that I don't need.

✓ Making a list allows me to know exactly what I need to buy and it prevents me from buying some other stuff that I don't need.

'Stuffs' is incorrect because 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'stuff' instead.

× It's sometimes work, but it sometimes doesn't work because I am a lazy person so I don't usually do the things that I made a list.

✓ It sometimes works, but sometimes it doesn't work because I am a lazy person, so I don't usually do the things that I made a list for.

'It's sometimes work' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'works'. Also, 'made a list' needs a preposition 'for' to complete the phrase.

× It's sometimes work, but it sometimes doesn't work because I am a lazy person so I don't usually do the things that I made a list.

✓ It sometimes works, but sometimes it doesn't work because I am a lazy person, so I don't usually do the things that I made a list for.

'Made a list' requires the preposition 'for' to indicate the purpose or object of the list.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more easier to remove the list whenever I am done with and if I have to correct them, it's such more easier.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to remove the list whenever I am done with it, and if I have to correct it, it's much easier.

'Done with' requires an object ('it'). 'More easier' and 'such more easier' are incorrect comparative forms; use 'easier' and 'much easier' instead. Also, 'them' should be 'it' to refer to 'list'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more easier to remove the list whenever I am done with and if I have to correct them, it's such more easier.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to remove the list whenever I am done with it, and if I have to correct it, it's much easier.

'Them' is incorrect because 'list' is singular; the pronoun should be 'it'. Also, 'done with' needs an object, so 'it' is necessary.