列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
No, I don't have the habit of keeping a list when I shop. I usually just wander around to pick up random items which I need.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
While working, I usually make a list because that makes things more organized and it makes me realize what step I'm in. That could definitely enhance the efficiency and effectiveness of my output.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think some people just regard making lists as something troublesome and time consuming, while others may lack confidence in themselves. They generally think they couldn't fulfill the things listed.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I generally prefer making a list on my smartphone because it is portable. Whenever I want to check the list, I can easily access the electronic version of the list and look at which step needs to be done next.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为自然，但缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词，建议增加具体例子并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse freely. For example, I often find unexpected items that I need, so I just pick them up as I go.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词和具体例子来丰富内容，使表达更自然。
範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, by checking off completed tasks, I can clearly see my progress, which improves my efficiency and the quality of my work.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容较好，但可以通过使用连接词和更具体的描述来增强逻辑性和表达效果。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming. Moreover, others might lack confidence and feel they won't be able to complete the tasks, which discourages them from listing.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 90.0建議: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以加入连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: I generally prefer making a list on my smartphone because it is portable and convenient. Therefore, whenever I want to check my tasks, I can easily access the electronic list and see which step I need to do next.
文法
× I usually just wander around to pick up random items which I need.
✓ I usually just wander around to pick up random items that I need.
这里使用关系代词时，通常用'that'来引导限定性定语从句，'which'一般用于非限定性定语从句。虽然不是严格的语法错误，但用'that'更合适。
× I think some people just regard making lists as something troublesome and time consuming, while others may lack confidence in themselves.
✓ I think some people just regard making lists as something troublesome and time-consuming, while others may lack confidence in themselves.
'time consuming'作为复合形容词修饰名词时，应使用连字符连接，形成'time-consuming'。
× They generally think they couldn't fulfill the things listed.
✓ They generally think they can't fulfill the things listed.
句子时态应与上下文保持一致，使用一般现在时态'can't'更合适，表示他们通常的想法。
× Whenever I want to check the list, I can easily access the electronic version of the list and look at which step needs to be done next.
✓ Whenever I want to check the list, I can easily access the electronic version of the list and see which step needs to be done next.
动词'look at'通常用于看具体的物体或方向，这里表达查看内容，使用'see'更合适。
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