列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. Using a note app on my iPhone makes it very convenient and helps me remember everything I need.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my school work. It helps me organize exercises and review what I need to improve after tests.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có liên kết giữa các ý. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it frustrating and time-consuming. Also, if they don't have many tasks, they may feel lists are unnecessary.

建議: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I just open the notes app and quickly jot down everything I need to do for the day.

× Honestly, I usually make notes when I go shopping because I'm a type of person who usually forget the stuff to buy, so I think making some notes is very important and convenient with the app on the iPhone.

✓ Honestly, I usually make notes when I go shopping because I'm a type of person who usually forgets the stuff to buy, so I think making some notes is very important and convenient with the app on the iPhone.

The verb 'forget' should be in the third person singular form 'forgets' to agree with the singular subject 'a type of person'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Honestly, I usually make notes when I go shopping because I'm a type of person who usually forget the stuff to buy, so I think making some notes is very important and convenient with the app on the iPhone.

✓ Honestly, I usually make notes when I go shopping because I'm a type of person who usually forgets the stuff to buy, so I think making some notes is very important and convenient with the app on the iPhone.

The verb 'forget' must be conjugated as 'forgets' to match the third person singular subject 'a type of person'. This is a third person singular issue.

× I have to do many types of exercise for school subjects, so making some notes is very important to me and when I finish a test I go take that note so I can know what things.

✓ I have to do many types of exercises for school subjects, so making some notes is very important to me and when I finish a test I go take that note so I can know what things.

The word 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple types, which requires the plural form.

× I have to do many types of exercise for school subjects, so making some notes is very important to me and when I finish a test I go take that note so I can know what things.

✓ I have to do many types of exercises for school subjects, so making some notes is very important to me. When I finish a test, I look at those notes so I can know what to improve.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. Breaking it into two sentences and clarifying the meaning improves readability and correctness.

× I think they find making this is frustrate and time consuming.

✓ I think they find making this frustrating and time-consuming.

The adjective 'frustrate' is incorrect here; the correct form is the adjective 'frustrating'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× So also they are the type of person do not have many exercise to do in their day so making a list is not important to them.

✓ Also, they are the type of person who does not have many exercises to do in their day, so making a list is not important to them.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, 'do not' should be 'does not' to agree with the singular subject 'type of person'.

× So also they are the type of person do not have many exercise to do in their day so making a list is not important to them.

✓ Also, they are the type of person who does not have many exercises to do in their day, so making a list is not important to them.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'type of person'.

× Just open my phone, click the app note and make some notes in that so I can list everything in my day to do.

✓ I just open my phone, click the Notes app, and make some notes there so I can list everything I have to do in my day.

The phrase 'click the app note' is awkward; 'click the Notes app' is clearer. Also, 'make some notes in that' is better as 'make some notes there'. The phrase 'list everything in my day to do' is incorrect; it should be 'list everything I have to do in my day'.