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考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Yes I do. Usually I make these every time when I go to the supermarket because I don't like forget to buy something and it can make me more effensive.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Yes I do. Usually I make a list for my work because the list can help me remind what should I do and when I should be done there.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

I think because the list can help people remember what should they do or when should we have done the thing.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

I prefer to make this in my because the we need every time and everywhere so enough the list on my can make me more quickly to see day.

評估

總分

總分: 5.0流暢度與連貫性: 5.0發音: 5.0文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 55.0

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误,如“don't like forget”应为“don't like to forget”,“effensive”应为“efficient”。建议注意动词不定式的使用和单词拼写,同时回答应更简洁自然,避免冗余。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need and shop more efficiently.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 50.0

建議: 回答中语法结构不正确,如“help me remind what should I do”应为“help me remember what I should do”。建议学习正确的句型结构,使用更自然的表达方式,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks and deadlines clearly.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 40.0

建議: 回答内容与问题不符,且语法错误较多。应直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢做清单,并给出具体原因。建议多练习回答问题的针对性和逻辑性。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 30.0

建議: 回答不完整且语法混乱,表达不清。建议练习完整句子表达,明确说明偏好并给出理由,使用连贯的句子结构。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere easily.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I do. Usually I make these every time when I go to the supermarket because I don't like forget to buy something and it can make me more effensive.

Yes I do. Usually I make these every time when I go to the supermarket because I don't like forgetting to buy something and it can make me more efficient.

动词后面需要用动名词形式forgetting,而不是动词原形forget。这里是介词like后面接动名词。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes I do. Usually I make these every time when I go to the supermarket because I don't like forget to buy something and it can make me more effensive.

Yes I do. Usually I make these every time when I go to the supermarket because I don't like forgetting to buy something and it can make me more efficient.

单词'effensive'拼写错误,应为'efficient',表示'有效率的'。

Incorrect word order (Sentence structure errors)

× Usually I make a list for my work because the list can help me remind what should I do and when I should be done there.

Usually I make a list for my work because the list can help me remember what I should do and when I should be done.

句子中'help me remind what should I do'结构不正确,应该是'help me remember what I should do',且疑问句语序不适用于陈述句。

Incorrect word order (Sentence structure errors)

× I think because the list can help people remember what should they do or when should we have done the thing.

I think because the list can help people remember what they should do or when we should have done the thing.

陈述句中不应使用疑问句语序,'what should they do'应改为'what they should do','when should we have done'应改为'when we should have done'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make this in my because the we need every time and everywhere so enough the list on my can make me more quickly to see day.

I prefer to make this on my phone because we need it every time and everywhere, so having the list on my phone can help me check it more quickly.

介词使用错误,'make this in my'应为'make this on my phone',且句子结构混乱,需要调整以表达清楚意思。

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