Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
No, I don't like to make a list when I want to go to shop because it's a complex process for me and I'm lazy so I don't like to make it.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Umm, I'm just a student so I don't need to make a list for my work, but I really like to make a list for my study. It can improve my learning efficiency and it can give me a sense of organization.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
There are several reasons for these questions. Some people don't like making it because they are lazy, so they think it's a complex thing, and other people think they want to.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer making a list on my phone because it's really convenient and I think it's more convenient than on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答不够自然,表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用更自然的表达方式。
範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it unnecessary and prefer to buy things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较好,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时避免重复使用“it can”。
範例: I'm a student, so I don't make lists for work, but I often make lists for my studies because they help me improve my learning efficiency and give me a sense of organization.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答不清晰且含糊,语法错误较多。建议明确表达原因,避免模糊和不完整的句子。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答重复使用“convenient”,建议使用同义词丰富词汇,同时可以增加具体原因。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more practical and easier to edit than paper lists.
× Some people don't like making it because they are lazy, so they think it's a complex thing, and other people think they want to.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are lazy, so they think it's a complex thing, and other people think they don't want to.
句中 'making it' 用法不当,'make a list' 应该用复数形式 'making lists',且后半句 'other people think they want to' 语义不完整,应为 'they don't want to',表示不想做。这里涉及动词-ing形式和句意表达的错误。