列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I have many items to buy because it helps me remember everything. Nowadays, it's more convenient to use my phone or a notepad app instead of paper, as I can access the list anytime.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Use linking words to clarify your points and avoid ambiguity.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. For example, if I focus on less important jobs first, I might not finish the critical ones on time.

建議: Your answer is understandable but includes hesitation and informal fillers like 'uh'. Try to avoid these and provide more specific reasons with clear structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel confident remembering tasks mentally, or they find list-making time-consuming. However, many prefer lists to stay organized and avoid forgetting important duties.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise and polished. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct minor grammatical errors for better clarity.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and accessible anytime, anywhere. It's easy to type, edit, and delete items as I complete them, which helps me stay organized.

× I usually make a list so that I can remember what are the items I need to purchase and it is more convenient nowadays.

✓ I usually make a list so that I can remember what items I need to purchase and it is more convenient nowadays.

In English, when using 'what' as a determiner before a noun, the verb 'are' is not needed. The phrase 'what are the items' is incorrect here; it should be 'what items' to correctly form the noun phrase.

× We can list it on our phone, notepad or traditionally people use it or write it on a paper.

✓ We can list it on our phone or notepad, or traditionally people use it or write it on paper.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'phone' and 'notepad', but 'on a paper' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'write it on paper' without the article 'a' because 'paper' is an uncountable noun in this context.

× And four is more convenient nowadays.

✓ And it is more convenient nowadays.

The pronoun 'four' is incorrect here; it seems to be a typo or mishearing. The correct pronoun to refer back to the list-making method is 'it'.

× ...you can sort it out which is the important to important to do at first, right?

✓ ...you can sort it out which is the important to do first, right?

The phrase 'the important to important to do' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'the important to do first' to express priority.

× So if you do some work which is less important the 1st and we failed to complete the task, which is more important?

✓ So if you do some work which is less important first and fail to complete the task which is more important, what happens?

The pronoun 'we' is inconsistent with the subject 'you' earlier. Also, 'the 1st' should be 'first' for clarity. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Some people don't like making lists just because I believe either they are lazy, uh, to prepare a list or or they think, uh, all of the task or things they can remember in their head, in their head.

✓ Some people don't like making lists just because, I believe, either they are lazy to prepare a list or they think they can remember all the tasks or things in their head.

The pronoun usage is inconsistent and awkward. 'All of the task or things' should be 'all the tasks or things'. Also, 'in their head' is repeated unnecessarily. The sentence is corrected for pronoun consistency and clarity.

× I always prefer to make a list on on my phone because it is more convenient and I can access it anytime, anywhere and it is easy to create.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and I can access it anytime, anywhere and it is easy to create.

The repetition of the preposition 'on' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'on'.

× Like whenever creating a phone, we can easily type and we can delete it whenever we don't need it, whenever we finish, finish the list.

✓ Like whenever creating a list on the phone, we can easily type and delete it whenever we don't need it or whenever we finish the list.

The phrase 'creating a phone' is incorrect; it should be 'creating a list on the phone'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.