列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy."

範例: Yes, I often make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. For example, "Yes, I often make work plans, which help me stay productive because I can set goals at my own pace and track my progress."

範例: Yes, I often make plans for my work because they help me stay organized and productive. By setting goals at my own pace, I can manage my tasks more effectively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and uses awkward expressions. Try to express your opinion more simply and directly. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to stay flexible and not be restricted by a fixed plan."

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they like to keep their options open and don't want to be limited by a strict schedule.

建議: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words and vary your vocabulary. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and secure. Additionally, I can easily access my plans anytime."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to worry about losing them. Plus, I can check my plans anytime, which helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I often make sure make a lift when I go shopping because I think it can make me think what I can buy.

✓ Yes, I often make sure to make a list when I go shopping because I think it can help me think about what I can buy.

The word 'lift' is a typo and should be 'list' which is singular and correct in this context. Also, the phrase 'make sure make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'make sure to make a list' to properly use the infinitive form after 'make sure'. Additionally, 'make me think what I can buy' is better expressed as 'help me think about what I can buy' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I often make sure make a lift when I go shopping because I think it can make me think what I can buy.

✓ Yes, I often make sure to make a list when I go shopping because I think it can help me think about what I can buy.

The phrase 'think what I can buy' is missing the preposition 'about' which is necessary after 'think' when referring to considering something. The correct phrase is 'think about what I can buy'.

× I often make plans for my work and I think it's very productive because I set goals at my own pace.

✓ I often make plans for my work and I think it's very productive because I set goals at my own pace.

This sentence is correct in terms of preposition use; no correction needed here.

× I have a better development pace.

✓ I have a better development pace.

The phrase 'development pace' is acceptable as singular; no plural issue here.

× I think their mentality is relatively they like to control the realm of things by themselves and don't want to limit it to be a big framework.

✓ I think their mentality is that they like to control the realm of things by themselves and don't want to limit it to a big framework.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'relatively' and lacks a proper conjunction or phrase to connect ideas. 'Relatively' is misplaced and 'they' is used awkwardly. The correction adds 'that' to introduce the clause properly and removes 'relatively' which was incorrectly used.

× I think their mentality is relatively they like to control the realm of things by themselves and don't want to limit it to be a big framework.

✓ I think their mentality is that they like to control the realm of things by themselves and don't want to limit it to a big framework.

The phrase 'limit it to be a big framework' is incorrect. It should be 'limit it to a big framework' without 'be' because 'limit to' is followed by a noun phrase, not a verb.

× I prefer to make plans on mobile phones. I think it's more convenient to make plans on mobile phones and at the same time it's easy to save without the risk of losing or damage.

✓ I prefer to make plans on mobile phones. I think it's more convenient to make plans on mobile phones and at the same time it's easy to save without the risk of losing or damaging them.

The phrase 'risk of losing or damage' is incorrect because 'losing' is a gerund but 'damage' is a noun. To parallel the structure, 'damage' should be changed to 'damaging' to match 'losing' as gerunds.

× I can also take a look at my plan when using my mobile phone.

✓ I can also take a look at my plan when using my mobile phone.

This sentence is correct; no pronoun errors found.