Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Definitely, because if I go to the shop that means I have many lots of sort of things to buy and the list can help me remember what I need to buy and I can check after after my shop.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Of course I make A to do list for my work and it really helped me to plan my time and priority, the things I need to do.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think maybe they like to do whatever they like in anytime and they don't want to plan in advance because this really limited limit what they can do.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Definitely on my phone because I don't really take paper and pen with me in today's daily life, but I always take my phone so I can check my list every time, anytime, anywhere, everywhere if I do my list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,且句子较长不够简洁。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and ensures I don't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中时态使用不准确,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇和语法结构。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and feel that planning limits their freedom.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答较长且重复,表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere.
× I have many lots of sort of things to buy
✓ I have many lots of sorts of things to buy
这里的复数形式使用不正确,'sort' 应该用复数 'sorts' 来表示多种类别。
× it really helped me to plan my time and priority
✓ it really helps me to plan my time and priorities
这里描述的是现在的习惯动作,应该用一般现在时 'helps',并且 'priority' 应该用复数 'priorities',因为通常有多个优先事项。
× they don't want to plan in advance because this really limited limit what they can do
✓ they don't want to plan in advance because this really limits what they can do
动词时态错误,应该用一般现在时 'limits',表示习惯性动作。
× I don't really take paper and pen with me in today's daily life
✓ I don't really take paper and pen with me in daily life nowadays
表达更自然,'in today's daily life' 不太地道,改为 'in daily life nowadays' 更符合英语习惯。