列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I buy things spontaneously. However, my mom often makes a list to help her remember what to buy.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连接词补充原因，表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work. However, they are not very helpful because my schedule changes frequently, so I don't always follow the list.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点，并举例说明。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think lists are unrealistic. For example, unexpected tasks can come up, making the list less useful.

建議: 回答较为完整，但有语法和表达上的小错误。建议注意句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's more convenient. I find it easier to read and it helps me remember my goals better than using my phone.

× Maybe my mom make list but I don't make a list or often because I was buying things what I wanted to buy so it doesn't need a list I think.

✓ Maybe my mom makes a list but I don't make a list often because I buy things that I want to buy so I don't think it needs a list.

主语是单数第三人称'my mom'，动词应加-s变为'makes'。'make list'缺少冠词，应为'make a list'。'or often'位置错误，应为'often'放在动词前。'was buying'时态不对，应为一般现在时'buy'。'what I wanted to buy'应改为'that I want to buy'。'doesn't need a list'主语是复数或泛指，应改为'don't think it needs a list'。

× Yes, I often make lists when I'm work, but I don't think it's very helpful to my work because I just make a list and put it in my schedule.

✓ Yes, I often make lists when I'm working, but I don't think it's very helpful to my work because I just make a list and put it in my schedule.

'I'm work'中work应为动名词形式，表示正在进行的动作，应改为'I'm working'。

× But I didn't focus on it because it's always change so it's maybe not helpful.

✓ But I don't focus on it because it always changes so maybe it's not helpful.

'didn't focus'与前后时态不一致，应使用一般现在时'don't focus'。'it's always change'中change应加-s变为changes，主语是第三人称单数。

× In my opinion, I think the list don't be realistic and there's some situation that you couldn't perceive.

✓ In my opinion, I think the list doesn't be realistic and there are some situations that you couldn't perceive.

'the list'为单数，谓语动词应为doesn't而非don't。'some situation'应为复数'some situations'。

× In my opinion, I think the list don't be realistic and there's some situation that you couldn't perceive.

✓ In my opinion, I think the list isn't realistic and there are some situations that you couldn't perceive.

'there's'是there is的缩写，后面应接单数名词，'some situation'应为复数'some situations'，因此应使用'there are'。

× So when the task is coming, just do the task and there's no task, you can just.

✓ So when the task comes, just do the task, and if there is no task, you can just relax.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，'when the task is coming'应改为更自然的'when the task comes'。'there's no task, you can just'不完整，需补充内容使句子完整。

× I prefer to make list on paper because I think it's more convenient and I don't like to make list on phone because I don't think I can easily read it or to be achieve my own goals.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because I think it's more convenient and I don't like to make lists on my phone because I don't think I can easily read them or achieve my own goals.

'make list'缺少冠词且应为复数形式，改为'make lists'。'on phone'应为'on my phone'。'read it'指代复数应为'them'。'to be achieve'结构错误，应为'verb + object'形式，改为'achieve'。

× I prefer to make list on paper because I think it's more convenient and I don't like to make list on phone because I don't think I can easily read it or to be achieve my own goals.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because I think it's more convenient and I don't like to make lists on my phone because I don't think I can easily read them or achieve my own goals.

'on phone'缺少所有格，应为'on my phone'。