列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'browse at the product' – it should be 'browse the products'.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the products and choose what catches my eye.

建議: Your answer has good content but some grammar and phrasing need improvement. For example, 'I am easily being distracted people' is incorrect; it should be 'I am easily distracted by people'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I am easily distracted by people, so having a list helps me stay on track and be more productive.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use singular/plural agreement correctly, e.g., 'making lists is' instead of 'making lists are'. Also, try to connect ideas with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too hectic and prefer to have more freedom without following strict schedules.

建議: Your answer needs clearer expression and grammar correction. For example, 'I can take on them' is unclear. Try to explain why paper lists are easier with specific reasons and use correct sentence structure.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to quickly check my daily tasks, and I can carry the list with me wherever I go.

× I browse at the product and get what I like.

✓ I browse the products and get what I like.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used after 'browse'. In English, 'browse' is usually followed directly by the object without a preposition, or sometimes 'through' can be used. Here, 'browse the products' is correct.

× I am easily being distracted people.

✓ I am easily distracted by people.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'by' to indicate the agent causing the distraction. Also, 'being distracted' is awkward here; the correct passive form is 'am distracted'. The pronoun 'people' needs to be connected with 'by' to show who causes the distraction.

× So I need to make a list to in order to keep myself right in track.

✓ So I need to make a list in order to keep myself right on track.

The phrase 'to in order to' is redundant; only 'in order to' is needed. Also, the correct preposition is 'on track', not 'in track'. The word 'right' is acceptable but 'right on track' is the common expression.

× Maybe they think that making lists are too hectic for them, they don't like following schedules.

✓ Maybe they think that making lists is too hectic for them; they don't like following schedules.

The subject 'making lists' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, the original sentence is a comma splice; it is better to separate the two independent clauses with a semicolon or period.

× They are more free, have more freedom.

✓ They are freer and have more freedom.

The adjective 'free' should be in comparative form 'freer' to compare properly. Also, connecting the two ideas with 'and' improves sentence flow.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier for me to refer to work that I need to do every day and I can take on them.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier for me to refer to the work that I need to do every day and I can take it with me.

The phrase 'refer to work' needs the definite article 'the' before 'work'. Also, 'take on them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take it with me' referring to the list. 'Them' is plural but 'list' is singular, so pronoun agreement is needed.