列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. It helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, making my shopping more efficient.

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear in places. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on clarity.

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me manage my time effectively. As a result, I can complete my tasks on time without forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Try to provide a bit more detail or examples to enrich your response.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it's a waste of time. They feel confident managing their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to avoid making lists.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Using my phone ensures I always have my tasks recorded and can complete them on time.

× Yes, whenever I go for a shopping then I try to make a list that I will not forget anything because list is the only thing that always give me a reminder that which I have to what things I have to buy or what I don't know.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping, I try to make a list so that I will not forget anything because the list is the only thing that always gives me a reminder of what things I have to buy or what I don't know.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is used as a gerund without an article here. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'list'. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× because list is the only thing that always give me a reminder that which I have to what things I have to buy or what I don't know.

✓ because the list is the only thing that always gives me a reminder of what things I have to buy or what I don't know.

The subject 'list' is singular and requires the verb 'gives' (third person singular). Also, 'that which I have to what things I have to buy' is awkward; 'reminder of what things I have to buy' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Just because of that, I wrote it, on I write it.

✓ Just because of that, I write it down.

The sentence mixes past tense 'wrote' and present tense 'write' incorrectly. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'write' is appropriate. Also, 'on' is incorrect here; 'down' is the correct particle to use with 'write' in this context.

× So that's why they always avoid to make a list for their work.

✓ So that's why they always avoid making a list for their work.

The verb 'avoid' is followed by a gerund, not an infinitive. Therefore, 'avoid to make' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid making'.

× I always like to make list on my phone because lots of time I make list on the paper.

✓ I always like to make lists on my phone because many times I make lists on paper.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances. 'Lots of time' is incorrect; 'many times' or 'often' is appropriate. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'.