列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a cake without forgetting anything, which saved me time and effort.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, giải thích rõ lý do và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, I can prioritize my tasks and ensure I complete everything on time.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp các lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to relax after work. Additionally, some are minimalists who prefer to keep things simple without detailed plans.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên sửa lại câu để rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ phù hợp.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update. Unlike paper lists that can be lost or damaged, digital lists are always accessible. For example, I can quickly check and edit my shopping list while I'm at the store.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because when I make a list all I can easily find I want to buy and it's convenient, useful for me to see the list.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because when I make a list, I can easily find what I want to buy, and it's convenient and useful for me to see the list.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. Adding commas and the word 'what' clarifies the meaning and improves readability.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because when I work I can see the list and it help me personal, functional and convenient for me.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because when I work I can see the list and it helps me personally, functionally, and conveniently.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the adverbs 'personally', 'functionally', and 'conveniently' are needed to correctly modify the verb.

× Some people don't like making this.

✓ Some people don't like making lists.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here because it does not refer clearly to 'making lists'. Using 'lists' clarifies the meaning.

× I think they don't want to waste their time for this and they don't have enough time to work or relax after they work or sometimes they they are minimalist.

✓ I think they don't want to waste their time on this, and they don't have enough time to work or relax after they work, or sometimes they are minimalists.

The preposition 'for' should be 'on' after 'waste their time'. Also, 'minimalist' should be plural 'minimalists' to refer to people.

× Unlike paperless, which can be lost or damaged digitally, are always available can can be updated quickly.

✓ Unlike paper, which can be lost or damaged, digital lists are always available and can be updated quickly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting 'paperless' to 'paper' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.