列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, jemon 'make' er jaygay 'makes' hote hobe. Apni answer ke aro natural korte paren, ebong kichu linking word use korte paren jate answer ta fluent hoy. Apni aro kichu specific karon dite paren jemon kon dhoroner list banan, ba ki ki jinis list e thake.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it makes the process more comfortable and less time-consuming. For example, I usually write down essential groceries like vegetables, fruits, and dairy products, which helps me avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Apnar uttor incomplete, tai eta clear na. Apni proshner shathe shathe complete sentence e uttor deben. Apni bolte paren ki dhoroner list banan, ebong seta kibhabe kaj kore.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it really helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

建議: Apnar uttor e proshner biporit kotha bolechen. Proshne jiggesh kora hoyeche keno kichu lok list banate pochondo kore na, kintu apni bolsen tara pochondo kore. Apni answer ta clear kore bolun, ebong grammar thik korun. Linking word use korben.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things mentally. However, I think lists help in organizing time and balancing work and personal life.

建議: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu grammar mistake ache, jemon 'make list' er jaygay 'make a list' hobe. Apni linking word aro bhalo vabe use korte paren. Apnar opinion ke aro specific korte paren.

範例: I actually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier and more convenient. For instance, whenever I remember something important, I quickly note it down on my phone, whereas writing on paper feels slower and less practical for me.

× Yes, I make a list when I do shopping because it make my shopping more comfortable and less time consuming.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I do shopping because it makes my shopping more comfortable and less time consuming.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, singular third-person subjects require verbs ending with 's' in the present tense.

× Yes, I make a list for.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'for'. Adding 'my work' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Some people like making list because it helps to people organize and managing their time and managing their work life and real life balance.

✓ Some people like making lists because it helps people organize and manage their time and balance their work life and real life.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'some people'. Also, 'helps to people organize and managing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps people organize and manage' to maintain parallel verb forms and correct preposition use.

× I actually prefer to make list on my phone because it's easier.

✓ I actually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to correctly express the general action of making multiple lists.

× I think when I thought about something I quickly note it in my phone.

✓ I think when I think about something I quickly note it in my phone.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Thought' should be 'think' to maintain present tense consistency with 'I think' and 'quickly note'. Alternatively, if referring to past, all verbs should be past tense.

× But if I need to write it down then I have to rush towards paper and pen so I don't prefer.

✓ But if I need to write it down, then I have to rush to paper and pen, so I don't prefer that.

The phrase 'rush towards paper and pen' is awkward; 'rush to paper and pen' is better. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I don't prefer'; adding 'that' clarifies the meaning. Commas improve readability.