列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it saves me a lot of time. Also, it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items, which is very helpful.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构，明确说明做清单的好处，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Certainly, I like to make lists for my work because they help me improve my efficiency. When I have a list, I can prioritize my tasks and complete them more effectively.

建議: 回答不够具体，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议给出具体原因，并用连词连接观点，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Actually, I don't understand why some people dislike making lists, but I guess they might find it time-consuming or feel that it limits their flexibility.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达，清楚说明偏好并解释原因。

範例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more straightforward. However, nowadays I use my phone more often since it's convenient and I can carry it everywhere.

× Yes I like make this one, I go shopping, it can save much time and if I make the list I do not buy the extra things, it can help.

✓ Yes, I like making this one. When I go shopping, it can save much time, and if I make the list, I do not buy extra things. It can help.

动词like后面应接动名词making，而不是动词原形make。

× Certainly I do like make a list for my work.

✓ Certainly, I do like making a list for my work.

动词like后面应接动名词making，而不是动词原形make。

× It's so nice for me and I think when I do the list I can first do.

✓ It's so nice for me, and I think when I make the list, I can do things first.

动词do the list不合适，应改为make the list。动词make后面不接the list的doing形式，且句子结构需调整。

× Actually, I can't understand why they don't like making this, but maybe I think, I guess they don't want to.

✓ Actually, I can't understand why they don't like making this, but maybe I think they just don't want to.

句子中“maybe I think”多余且不通顺，应删去。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper, but nowadays the phone is more quickly and concentrate to bring them to everywhere.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper, but nowadays the phone is quicker and more convenient to bring everywhere.

quickly是副词，应改为形容词quicker。concentrate用法错误，应改为more convenient或其他合适表达。

× if I make the list I do not buy the extra things

✓ if I make the list I do not buy extra things

extra things前不需要定冠词the，因为这里指的是泛指的额外物品。

× So now now I more make phone use.

✓ So now I use my phone more.

句子结构混乱，正确表达应为“I use my phone more.”，去掉多余词汇，调整语序。