列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer ta onek boro ar kichu part redundant. Apni chesta korun short ar clear sentence use korte, jate answer ta natural lage. Apni bolte paren keno list banan, ar kothay list rakhen, ektu specific details diye.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget items. I usually write it on my phone so I can check it anytime while shopping.

建議: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar ar linking word use korle aro bhalo hobe. Apni bolte paren kibhabe list apnar kaj shomoy manage korte help kore, ar kichu specific example dite paren.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work calls every day. It helps me organize my schedule and ensures I don't miss any important calls.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu unclear ar incomplete sentence ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar complete sentence use korte. Apni bolte paren karon gulo, jemon tara confident je tara mone rakhte parbe, ba tara list banate pochondo kore na. Ektu specific ar logical explanation din.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and feel it is faster to remember tasks without writing them down.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun linking words use korte, ar sentence gulo ke clear ar concise korte. Apni bolte paren phone list er advantage gulo ar paper list er kono problem ache kina.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere and check it easily. Paper lists are inconvenient since I often forget to bring them when I go out.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go to shop because I forget many things to shop so I write it down in my bed or in my mobile to get remembered all the all those things that should be buy or purchased.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I forget many things to buy, so I write them down on my bed or in my mobile to remember all those things that should be bought or purchased.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity. Also, 'forget many things to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'forget many things to buy' because 'buy' is the correct verb for purchasing items. 'Get remembered' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. 'Should be buy' should be 'should be bought' as the past participle is needed here.

× Yes, I always do a list for my work calls because it is my work schedule and to accomplish all the works in a day.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work calls because it is my work schedule and helps me accomplish all the work in a day.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. 'All the works' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun here and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'helps me' to connect the ideas clearly.

× Maybe they can remember all those things to work or to do, and they can have good memorizing skill.

✓ Maybe they can remember all those things to work on or to do, and they have good memorization skills.

The phrase 'things to work' is incomplete; it should be 'things to work on'. 'Memorizing skill' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'memorization skills'. Also, 'can have' is better as 'have' to express ability or possession.

× They can be able to get rid of all these things that should be done in the future.

✓ They are able to get rid of all these things that should be done in the future.

The phrase 'can be able to' is redundant; either 'can' or 'be able to' should be used, not both together. Simplifying to 'are able to' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× They can have the good merit also, but everyone should have at least to go forward in a day or in a.

✓ They can have good merits also, but everyone should at least move forward each day.

The phrase 'the good merit' is incorrect; 'good merits' is better. The phrase 'should have at least to go forward in a day or in a' is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to 'should at least move forward each day' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always prefer make a list on my phone because it can be movable at anywhere, I can see it from any places, but keeping a paper or something else is very much difficult when I go out because I have often have a bag.

✓ I always prefer making a list on my phone because it is portable anywhere; I can see it from any place, but keeping paper or something else is very difficult when I go out because I often have a bag.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'making'. 'Movable at anywhere' is incorrect; 'portable anywhere' or 'can be carried anywhere' is better. 'Any places' should be 'any place' as 'any' is usually followed by singular noun in this context. 'Very much difficult' is incorrect; 'very difficult' is correct. 'I have often have a bag' is redundant; 'I often have a bag' is correct.