列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use plural form correctly and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I love to make lists when I shop" instead of "make list". Also, you can add linking words to make your answer more coherent, like "because it helps me remember what I want, so it's really convenient."

範例: Yes, I love to make lists when I shop because it helps me remember what I want, so it's really convenient and saves time.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like "therefore" or "so" to connect ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrases like "I make it work 'cause it needs to be work done." Instead, say "I make a list of tasks to ensure everything gets done."

範例: Yes, I love to organize things, so every morning I sit down and plan my day. I make a list of tasks to ensure everything gets done efficiently.

建議: Use more natural expressions and linking words. For example, say "In my opinion" instead of "In my point of view." Also, use "because" and "so" to connect ideas clearly. Try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it takes up time, so they prefer to do tasks spontaneously when they feel it's necessary.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve coherence. For example, say "because my phone is always with me" instead of "for all the time because." Also, use linking words like "since" or "because" to explain reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper can be lost, and my phone is always with me. Since phones are essential nowadays, it's more convenient.

× Yes, I love to make list when I shop because it helps me to remember what I want and it's really convenient for shopping.

✓ Yes, I love to make lists when I shop because it helps me to remember what I want and it's really convenient for shopping.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker is referring to making more than one list in general. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when talking about them in a general sense or more than one.

× So at the morning I just sit and plan throughout my day.

✓ So in the morning I just sit and plan throughout my day.

The correct preposition to use with 'morning' is 'in' not 'at'. 'At' is used for specific times, while 'in' is used for parts of the day like morning, afternoon, and evening.

× Every work that I need to get done throughout the day, I make a list for them and I make it work 'cause it needs to be work done.

✓ Every task that I need to get done throughout the day, I make a list for them and I make it work 'cause it needs to be work done.

The word 'work' is uncountable and does not fit well here. 'Task' is a better countable noun to refer to individual items to be done. Also, 'them' refers to plural, so 'task' should be plural if 'them' is used. Alternatively, rephrasing is needed for clarity.

× Every work that I need to get done throughout the day, I make a list for them and I make it work 'cause it needs to be work done.

✓ Every task that I need to get done throughout the day, I make a list for them and I make it work because it needs to be done.

The phrase 'it needs to be work done' is incorrect. It should be 'it needs to be done' to correctly express that the work must be completed. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is better in formal speech.

× In my point of view, I think some people don't like making a list because they think it may take up their time or not planning everything ahead is better because they can do everything they want at the time they think it needs to be done.

✓ In my point of view, I think some people don't like making a list because they think it may take up their time or that not planning everything ahead is better because they can do everything they want at the time they think it needs to be done.

The phrase 'or not planning everything ahead is better' needs 'that' to connect the clause properly. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because paper can be lost but my phone will be with me for all the time because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because paper can be lost but my phone will be with me all the time.

The phrase 'for all the time' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'all the time' without 'for'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'because' which is unnecessary here.